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absolutly loved it

WOW ... Great Story ... Please continue to write you have the gift for it.

"The play’s the thing, Wherein I’ll catch the conscience of the king." - Hamlet, Act 2, Scene 2, Page 24

Caught - definitely caught ;)

A terrific story told with skill.

I liket the bit wear her head was bobbing on her cock!!

Great writteng sir.... Too good for the white blond on there knees,

Its just the storie is to short BUT GReaT""

Baybysit the prissy anytime at my house with the mates gone for the might to get cheap beer.Don't kno I'm receding this never will tell.

Keep up the goods for your strongest fan bass in history!!

Jacked out GFunnk!!

Beautiful writing, really. The sex was hot and more than arousing, but, a greater compliment, is that I enjoyed the spaces between the steam as much or more than the fucking itself. The little parts in this piece really sing. They're descriptive, poignant, interesting, and just flat-out enjoyable. Your sentences, at times, are absolutely delectable, and I consumed them ravenously. Even now, I'm hungry for more.

You have a strong style and an agile mind. I appreciate that even more than fast fingers or powerful hips. Well done.

Great first two chapters, keep it coming!

Great story. Waiting for chapter 3 and other Caroline adventures.

That was hot! Great job on your first story. Looking forward to more of the same. Thanks.

I thought it was well-written, although a little confusing at the very end, but it didn't detract form the enjoyment of the story.

Please write some more. Take Caroline's story further!

You write such exquisite descriptions of what's going on physically, and in the character's mind. Keep this story going!

This is the best story I've read on Literotica. You have told it masterfully and with just enough detail to bring your readers into the heart of the story. You have a real gift of both character development and story telling that I hope you will continue to share with those of us who love the bit of naughty along with a lot of passion. I loved it. Thanks again, for sharing. Tom

Best combination of reluctance and giving in, you should post some similar stories or continue on. You're writing is superb. Really good show of emotions within the characters.

Seems gross punishment: virginity taken for masturbating while watching porn! That said, Mr Peterson was clearly an opportunist and Caroline . . .well, not that reluctant to submit and discover what pleasure she can derive from forceful sex. Explicit writing with consideration given to Caroline's fears and hesitation.

Wonderfully explicit and great fun! This chapter was even better than chapter 1. Please consider revisiting the adventures of Caroline. You've teased us with her roommate in college and more with Mr. Peterson. Great sexual tension maintained through-out!

You've got a new fan. 5*

Keep up the writing - you have a great ability to tell stories.

Perfectly done.