All Comments on 'Bruises Ch. 10-11'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
Oh, God I can't stand it

Kathi-You have ruined my Literotica reading routine. I usually read all of the new stories in the categories that I like first but now I look for your next Bruises chapter. Once I finish it I've already had my morning come so I don't bother to read the other stories.

You are the greatest.

AhabscribeAhabscribealmost 16 years ago
Blood Pressure's rising!

What a wonderful entry in this story! You've taken Peggy-Mom and Walt to the next level, yet still have us on the edge of our seats begging for more. You beautifully captured perfectly the beginning of true intimacy between mother and son! I especially like his calling her "Peggy-Mom" and her responding to it. There are two lines of thoughts about whether a son should call his motherlover "Mom" or her given name and kathi, you've managed to straddle the fence there perfectly! Anxiously looking forward to the next!

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