by Fay32
Fay32 has put in an incredible effort here and I was hooked from beginning to end. Very detailed and easy to read. I look forward to plenty more from this awesome new author!
A very sexy debut if I do say so. Very hot, very well written, looking forward to any more she might right. You have some skill Fay.
This story is very hot. It is also very well written.I look forward to reading more from you Fay
wow..what a great story and very well written. love every bit of it.... :) keep writing
Such an incredible use of three cocks, Bruna was such a lucky girl! Thanks Fay32
Fay has crafted a sweet little gem of a story that manages to walk the very fine line between believability and sheer fantasy. I am usually not very fond of "gang bang" stories but Bruna is a well-developed character with her own agency and that makes this one a surprising delight for me.
Very well written, with a hint of believability. Enjoyed this enornously. Excellent and I hope you continue to write.
What you described has been a fantasy of mine to share with a wife.
Two of my friends and me as the 3rd.
Thank you for letting me enjoy my desire in your words
Scott
can see Bruna covered in cum and satisfied after reading this, well done!
A very enjoyable story, it didn't drag on like lots do. Simplistic approach with a satisfying (for all) ending
Had to read your stories after speaking in the room.......must admit for for a short story it was pleasantly descriptive.