All Comments on 'Brutus and the Vampire'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago

hot and sexy. hope their story continues

purplhazepurplhazeover 11 years ago
Hot and sweet

But it seems incomplete. Hope it doesn't end like this.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Dear writer

This is the best story I ever read ... and I'm gonna make this comment like a letter to show how serious I am xD

I'm kinda a bookworm so I read a lot and trust me you are a great writer

don't quit this story I'd really love to read more of this

please continue writing

yours faithfully J.M

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago

yes, please do continue!

icefang4436icefang4436about 11 years ago

I like it :3 I find it funny how everyones view of a vampire changes though

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
i was nervous for the both of them

i didn't know who was going to come out on top. that was nicely wriiten just enough tension, to have me reading to the end to see who would win out, but thanks for the end, learn to trust to find love

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

It was okay. Ended too abruptly; such as turning off a tv set during a show or film. That Vampire should have butt fucked Brutus' tight virgin ass and made him his bitch.

Then, John could live the high life feeding off his sugar daddy, both by blood and wealth. Thus Brutus gets mouth fucked and man-pussy fucked nightly by his dominant vampire boi. Living until death as a former macho vampire hunter turned muscled bottom Slut who craves cold hard vamp cock constantly.

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