by AntoinetteM
This is the best story I ever read ... and I'm gonna make this comment like a letter to show how serious I am xD
I'm kinda a bookworm so I read a lot and trust me you are a great writer
don't quit this story I'd really love to read more of this
please continue writing
yours faithfully J.M
I like it :3 I find it funny how everyones view of a vampire changes though
i didn't know who was going to come out on top. that was nicely wriiten just enough tension, to have me reading to the end to see who would win out, but thanks for the end, learn to trust to find love
It was okay. Ended too abruptly; such as turning off a tv set during a show or film. That Vampire should have butt fucked Brutus' tight virgin ass and made him his bitch.
Then, John could live the high life feeding off his sugar daddy, both by blood and wealth. Thus Brutus gets mouth fucked and man-pussy fucked nightly by his dominant vampire boi. Living until death as a former macho vampire hunter turned muscled bottom Slut who craves cold hard vamp cock constantly.