by Quietoldie
mmm, this is going to be good ,hurry up and write the next episode please .
His answer was simply "no". So what if the women said anything? No one is going to believe them. He'd simply say his wife got drunk and was talking about her fantasies. All three women would just look silly. And why would he be afraid of his wife? Does she really think she could over power her husband? If she tries to spank him just bitch slap her. Or if she succeeds call the Police. I wonder how the view from jail is for her? It's called spousal abuse. Even of he goes to Madge and Margaret's house all he needs to do it threaten them. You know how easy it is to break a woman's little finger? Or are they Amazon women too? Giving him the hormone pills was the final dagger to this stupidity. What happens if he has a bad reaction to them? Are they Doctors? And what about hiring a PI to get the goods on his unfaithful wife and very publicly divorcing her and embarrassing her? This stupid story never had a chance. It's so ludicrous and unbelievable that I'm still laughing at how bad it was. No stars.
Normally I Love forced feminization, but this story (I use that term very loosely) was AWFUL.
There was no build up and you just threw your readers into a web of ridiculousness.
I will give one positive note, I was looking forward to this when I saw the title...
I think this could be a great story with several chapters because you have a decent idea that people come here to read.
However, currently this is a serious miss. I would be embarrassed if I had posted this; and whoever proofread it failed you miserably.
I hope you are some younger kid who knows nothing about writing, it is the only logical explanation for such a juvenile entry.
Better luck next time.
It is an exciting story. I would love to be Bryan and be dressed like that. At my age, I may be a bit past it but it made my cock feel a lot younger.
It is so easy for young bulls to be critical but spare a thought for older men.
It was so sexy. Calling him Shirley was brilliant.
"Why don't you call me Madge dear, we're all girls together aren't we Shirley?" Madge says opening her legs wider. She strokes herself briefly and lets out a deep sigh.
You should write more like this.
I guess. my clit got all hard in my panty. Seriously, it was obvious the wife ruled his world and he was submissive, and was on the fem side from the beginning. If she wants her bosses kids then get a divorce, if she doesn't love him get a divorce. If she is going to bring sissy her cum filled pussy and ass to clean up, love it.
Please continue this story. I can't wait to read about how Shirley is treated by the ladies and by his Mistress wife. I too am a CD who wishes my wife would find out and treat me like Shirley's wife treats him.
If there is a story that deserves a second chapter, it's this one. Yes my panty got tight reading it. I already gave it a 5, and this is at least my second read. My main concern is if his wife really loves him, and what her intentions are, for her husband and herself.
Being exposed to her girl friends is a fantasy of mine also, and a lot of others.
Change him to a woman. Will he suck guys dick, having them penetrate his pussy. I wish I had someone do that to me.
run get away from that whore you call a wife she is just another slut that you don't need time to go
Absolutely loved this story. Wish you'd continue it. Totally a fantasy of mine
Lovely. My wife makes me wank until I come in my panties while she tells me what she'd like to do with a real man. I think she might be ready to meet a man with me, and tell him she doesn't allow me intercourse.
Shirley should be trained to lick Madge and Margaret every Wednesday, and go home with spunk filled knickers.
Yuck. Hate this story. I like sucking cock but it has never made me feel feminine. Plus if I found out you drugged me, the next day I'd show up at your place & violence would ensue. I'd take your phone & use the photos to divorce my wife. I can't understand this fantasy story line.