by rockandroller
Giddyup, and write some more filly breed'n stories. :-)
I have to tell you this was so erotic, I use to ride horses and when you described her rubbing on the horn and him. I relived a similar situation, great use of words and your cowboy speech... i really enjoyed the story...
One of the very best! I laughed so hard I thought I was gonna pee myself. But it was also very romantic as well. Of course I do have to point out that you (the author) managed something almost impossible, the creation of a story in which the characters come across as sympathetic real people even with the constraints of length and descriptive sex taking up a lot of space. I predict that the author will go far if they continue to write to this level.
Excellent English, and excellent writing. Thank you, and congratulations.
GREAT SUPERHOT SEX becomes love at first sight and even marriage. What a concept! I adore this romantic adventure. Second reading is more than worth it.
I've had a cowboy or two in my day and all I can say is WOW.... You did a FANTASTIC job of writing this story. XOXO, Victoria
Damned near made this tired ol' cowboy cry... just remembering what used to be. Thanks for the kicking the memories into play. Love to have a few more like this.
Oh boy! I adore bull riding and this story was no exception. So hot.... so wet... lvoed it. *blows kiss*
I once was a buckle bunny, and I married (what you guys would call) a Cowboy, very beleivable, nice setting awesome realism. Well done.
Rattus
I loved your story - the pony girl thing isn't for me at all, but everything, especially the set up and characters were fantastic!
Never was one for cowboys and rodeos, but reading this story makes me wish I was a rodeo cowboy! Very Hot!!!
A sexy cowgirl nude except for her boots and hat. HOT! I get hard just thinking about a girl like that. I think that cowgirl and cowboy sex is hot to begin with, but you painted a great picture with this story. Keep writing!
I F'n LOVED IT! I've got something of a tail-fetish, and coupled with how hot you described that lil'Bunny.. well SHOOT, if it wasn't one of the hotest things i've ever read!
Been there pard. Never had the cahones to write about it though. Happy trails.
Your discriptions were so vivid that I thought that I was a active person in your story...GOOD JOB