All Comments on 'Build It And She Will Come'

I´m longing for the next part to be written. It´s a mild story without pain and cruel sadism. I like it because there is an edge that can be real. Keep on writing I´m checking this site everyday. WATT

Loved the build up, the anticipation... The idea is hot, the description is mouthwatering... Tasteful, erotic, very juicy. Can't wait for more...

Great Story. Really like the idea on the machine. Looking forward to more

you need to make a second ome whoot that was .. great please write another one i loved this one please and thank youuuu -lj

I couldn't follow the images of the machine you built. I was looking forward to more details in the next story but......

Please, please proof read your next submission. It is very distracting to be reading a good story and come up against poor grammar.