All Comments on 'Bully Came To Dinner'

thank you, good story!

Thank you!

Maybe best story 'mom-son's bully' story on this site! 5*

Seems like a lot. This one was pretty good.

Amazing story. Excellent pacing. Great detail. Hope to read more stories from you with the mom bully son theme.

It would be cool if the bully forced the son to shave his mom's pussy or the bully took the mom to get tattooed. Maybe you would be kind enough to have such a scenario in a future story.

One of the better mom/son's bully stories on the net 5/5

should be put down.

It was too derivative, it was obvious how it was going to end from the very beginning, and there were too many editing errors in the story ( for example, has Russell just finished his first or second year at University? If he is at University, how come his parents have only been together 17 years?)

i thought the story had a great build up and very good payoff, the sex scenes on page four got super hot. i would really love to read another chapter

Often in this genre the mother's motivation is rather thin. You however did a good job in the build up in describing Denise's marital problems and her attraction to Sean. That made it more believable that she'd want to fuck her son's bully.

Once the action started, I loved the way she started treating her son, especially badmouthing him during sex. So fucking hot. I was a tad disappointed that it ended with the bully leaving her, even though it was realistic and true to his character. I'm hoping this could be a setup for a future chapter, where she tries to win him back by proving to him how much more he means to her than her own worthless son.

One small bit of constructive criticism: I noticed several places where you used the wrong word. For example, 'exhumed' confidence instead of exuded confidence, veranda 'stares' instead of veranda stairs, or when Russell descended the stairs 'disparagingly' instead of despairingly. Maybe these were just autocorrect errors? Other than these minor issues, I loved the story and hope you write more.

The only thing good about this story was that the bully dumped the cunt. She was undoubtedly a terrible wife definitely a terrible mother, selfish self centered and stupid. She doesn't deserve to be happy after all the disrespect she dished out. The son should have moved out and in with dad and uncle

This was a great Mom being screwed by a young guy story.!!! I hope you write more stories this like this one.!!!

Sequel with mom and son would make a great story,waiting for the sequel.

This was a great story! I hope Sean has future relationships with other older women in subsequent stories.

Really, a great story. The best one of these I've seen.

Thanks!

This started as one of the greatest Adult stories ever. Then you FUCKED IT UP

WITH THE ENDING!

Should have had Denise & Sean fucking more, cursing out the son, it would have been historic

I wasted 90 minutes on this crap! I am so pissed!-EATANDBEMERRY

I like the way it ended mostly

The only thing that made this story ok was the ending and even it sucked but stories like this can never be good cause it promotes bullying and promotes betrayal in a way saying that it is ok to do both the worst part was how she betrayed her son with his bully and allowing him to call her son names around her and even joining him in calling her son names and enjoying it but the fact that she wanted him to call her mommy during sex hints that she wanted a sexual relationship with her son you still could have made it better by writing into the story where he had enough and stood up for himself and made his mother choose between him and his bully but you chose to make him a pussy which killed the story write another chapter and make it to where she starts a fling back up with the bully only this time he stands up for himself and also makes her choose keeping a relationship and in good terms with her son or his bully

Loved this!! Particularly the sense of betrayal!!

...but a good story with a clever twist.

Men forget that women can be just as needy, if not more so.

You were very detailed and know that a great story is much more than having sex.

Maybe rewrite the ending.

The reason why Sean didn't return phone calls and text is because he knows he has Denise just where he wants her making her want him that much more.

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I can NOT believe the last comment. Do they read Literotica at all????? Good story, well written and well told. I like that you write other types of stories as well. I'd like to see more of this one, but now have you on my radar.

I haven't read a story where the Sean-like character starts with a young male 'victim', then comes back later to take his wife and/or his secretary and, by then, his daughter(s). Good luck and good writing.

Realise this has been up a while but still really turned on by the story. Loved the betrayal. Really regret that there doesn't seem to be a sequel. Agree with others that the ending was a bit shite. I wish mother had continued dominating her son. Maybe caught him perving on her again and forced him into chastity and denial/made fun of his tiny dick etc with her new boyfriend Sean maybe a cheeky bit of forced bi humiliation. Great story though and a great genre.

whore

She acted like a whore and you guys are all surprised she got treated like a whore too in the end. Dumb story, but thought the ending was really good.

please update more

She laughed as she poured out the coffee into mugs. "Don't worry, it's been brewing for a bit now." Internally she wondered again why she was revealing such personal details about herself and her family. She considered her unintended 'brewing' pun. Her husband might have caught it, but Sean didn't catch it.

"Maybe I'm not quick witted like him," he said.

** The only way he would have said this is if he could read her mind and hear her thoughts.

Think about what that dialog would have sounded like:

She laughed as she poured out the coffee into mugs. "Don't worry, it's been brewing for a bit now," [she said.]

"Maybe I'm not quick witted like him," he said.

** That makes no sense, does it? The second line of dialog is a non sequitor.

Denise is a stupid whore who doesn't actually love her son and certainly doesn't care about the damage she did to him or their relationship. Denise should've ended up alone at the end of the story, a stupid whore like that doesn't deserve any better.

Some authors get unfairly bad scores because of their sensitivity. This world isn't unicorns and rainbows. Literotica is great because you can tell all kinds of stories from each category. I have no sympathy for her. Got everything she deserved at the end.

Sean tells her, in a text, he " Wouldn't miss seeing those legs ".

This, standing by itself, is a NEGATIVE COMMENT.

If a man wants to see a woman's lovely legs again, he says, " Wouldn't mind seeing those legs."

If she had REALLY great legs, he might say, "I wouldn't miss seeing those legs for anything in the world."

That, clearly, is a compliment.

But "won't miss" is negative: Thank god that course is over. I won't miss those damn tests.

And, by extension, we use "wouldn't miss" in reported speech. "He told me he wouldn't miss those tests (because they were HORRIBLE)."

Great story, in the end she deserved what she got to be honest as all whores do, and now her son knows that it's because of her whore tendencies that destroyed his parents' marriage, maybe now he'll treat her like one too, hell would love to see another follow up story where the son decides to do this and just hate fuck her for what she did, she sounds like the type who deserves it!!!

Really this was bull the mother not even trying to stand up for her son and him not even standing up for himself is bull shit

Betraying her husband and son to be a terrible whore for some asshole. Enjoying looking down on the people who loved her. Thinking she is too good for them. Enjoying being objectified by a teenager she doesn't know, while attaching a sense of her self worth to the desire that bully has for. How exactly is her husband an idiot for walking away from that when she gave him the chance?

Modern times are terrible for love.

Rusty is a wimp because he forgives his mom and passively accepted her abuse. Hard choice though; choosing either to love your mother or have self respect. People should get both, and I expect a lot of people don't know how to have one without the other.