All Comments on 'Bully Ch. 03'

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CHL88CHL88about 7 years ago
Great story

Keep it up!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Loving it

Loved the shave scene. James should get her tattooed and pierced too in later chapters. Maybe he can take her to the barber and get her hair side shaved and dyed as well.

Brendan could appear more in the later chapters with feelings of jealousy, anger etc...

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Simply ridiculous

They'd be in jail. Your assumption that she wouldn't seek help is ludicrous. Even for fiction this was just stupid.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
great

Love the story! Keep it going. Have James take her home and fuck her in the bed she shares with her husband. Then have James take her while her husband and son are in the house. Eventually have James take over the household and claim her as his, fucking her constantly in the master bedroom while her husband is relegated to the guest room.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago

enjoying the story

have to have her being made to expose herself more to other and lose the panties

Simon39Simon39about 7 years ago

Good story! Keep it going!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
more

make her throw an end of year party for some of the kids, and get spied on fucking this guy by a black student who in turn blackmails her and slams her in order to keep his mouth shut about her indiscretions

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago

Someone I know was fucking another friends married mother for years. On the day her son got married he was fucking her up the ass an hour before the limo left for the church. He also had her sneak and blow him at the catering hall and told her to go straight over to hubby and give him a big kiss which she did. Oddly enough they haven't been caught . He's trying to get her to let another friend DP her but she's very reluctant. If she only knew how many have seen her in action on video. He said if he really didn't like her and her family he would tell her he would send videos to everyone if she didn't fuck whoever he said. He even gets her to rim his ass hole. On tape one time she did it for 10+ minutes after she sucked him getting his dick all wet , then made her beg to get fucked while he rubbed and slapped her face with his dick. He then roughly pounded her ass, the best porn we ever saw. The family would be destroyed if this ever got back to them . Hope they stay very careful

Gem_tigerGem_tigerabout 7 years ago
Take a breather

Good story so far but, you are beginning to lose 'your' identity. Loads of similar stories have the bully take the victim shopping, then the blackmailing the family so the husband ends up in the guest room while the bully sleeps in the marital bed .... yawn, yawn. Keep the story 'yours' ... you are doing great so far. Well done

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Meh

I'm just waiting for a single one of these mouth-breathing basement fantasies to end with the bully getting a bullet to the brain, like he deserves. Not ours of course. I've seen a couple of your stories and they all seem to read like the desperate ramblings of someone trying to prove they've got any kind of self-confidence by demeaning women with the written word because they fear them in real life.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
I love it

Forget negative comments. Take her out James! Mall, dinner, movies. She loves it.

chrissy2chrissy2about 5 years ago
slut

as a 25 yr old I am aware of the psy of younger teen older woman

TwistedDaveAuthorTwistedDaveAuthor12 months ago

I love your stories, but just once can the woman be saved and justice served?

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