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Click hereJames could see she was interested in picking up some juicy gossip for her lady friends, the ladies who dinned.
'Certainly, Mrs Morgan. We shall be looking forward to seeing you. We must get on, more shoes are needed,' he said.
'Oh! Really? Oh! Fab! Like, really, I need more shoes, you know, a pair of shoes for every outfit, yea!' she exclaimed, while they carried on through the mall.
Mrs Morgan had been forgotten, until they reached home.
'You know, like, brunch, are you sure, master?' Alicia hesitantly asked.
'We've invited her now, and can't back out. You'll be fine. Do you have everything you need, for brunch? Okay, we'll shop in the morning,' James told her, and got the usual response to shopping, with hoorays, and the delightful bouncing breasts.
- COMMENTS
Anonymousover 6 years agoyour story does not inculde the real perspect on person
so that's stupid
you write porn story just remember , don't compare to normal TV show
I was out of net ,COME BACK TO REMIND YOUR STUPILITY !!
cucky shit
StoryTeller07over 6 years agoAuthorThanks for pointing out to the troll there is a difference between fantasy and reality. Their previous comments had to be deleted because of the bad language and insults.
Your English is excellent, by the way.
People like watching murder mystery shows on TV, but don't condone murder, and neither does the writer. Anyway, I don't think logic is sought by small minded trolls.
Err, is your bottom red from a spanking? Have you been a naughty girl? Does it need soothing with cool ointment and a steady hand?
Sorry if I'm being presumptuous, and out of hand. Err, you are a female, aren't you?
Tomatobottomover 6 years agoTo the person who posted the last comment if you commented from an account, it would be easier to address you. No offense but consider it for future. I had a little difficulty to understand what you wanted to say, may be a little attention to the grammar would help. Still a reasonable job if English is not your first language (like me, so please forgive my mistakes as well).
Well, I am here cause I like the series and most of the stories by this author. Not all of them but most. You see, I have a reason to come here. If I disliked the subjects, I wouldn't spend my time here, would be an idiotic act.
It is good to see you understand what is right and what is wrong and smart enough to differ between them. But sad to see you are not smart enough to see the difference between fantasy and real life. And if you dislike the author/ his stories, may I ask you why you are lurking here like an idiot? Being a moral police?
If you are morally so correct, I don't think there are enough stories for you on Literotica. But hey, you can object to thousands of stories, leave stupid comments and be a real piece of shit. I hope you'll enjoy that.
Oh, if you have something to say to me, you can either leave a comment or just PM me. Though I highly doubt that trolls like you would ever do that. You trolls are so pathetic that you are too afraid to message from a registered account, even on the internet.
Anonymousover 6 years agoif you respect woman don't do this subject
people come to see degrading and humiliation , you think james treat her like a mother or wife
StoryTeller07over 6 years agoAuthorComments have been deleted because bad language was used. In context bad language can be used, but not to insult people on this WEB site. Negative comments about these stories is welcome, if it is constructive. This means saying what you find wrong, with the story, not just slagging off the author, or readers. If you don't understand what the author is trying to say, sometimes the opposite to what is written, ask, don't just assume and then use bad language.
A murder story does not condone murder. These fantasy stories do not condone violence, or even meanness to women. Women should be treated with respect, as all people should. In many ways women are superior to men. We don't have the responsibilities they have, and so we can play games all our lives. Watching games on TV, playing with friends, making work into a game, making life into a game,
Think about it, don't just react with bad language. If you disagree, then say something sensible, not just a knee jerk reaction. The key word there is jerk.
StoryTeller07over 6 years agoAuthorI agree with the comments about the chapters becoming stale and with less tension. I was going to end the series, but someone suggested bringing in another woman into the matrix.
There is a surprise to come, so be patient. It might work or it might not, we'll see.
I've had a lot of work on recently leaving little time to write. A chapter takes a week to write, then several days to edit. Even then I miss errors from changes made when revising the work. No excuses, just saying how it is.
Anonymousover 6 years agoGood to see you update the story at last, please add more chapters soon. I liked the part but would love to see some humiliation and reluctance from Alicia, as someone mentioned, that made the story great.
May be add something more daring to spice it up. Make Alicia take a nude sunbath on the patio with the risk of being discovered by others. Or James could have a party and Alicia would server his friends and had to show them her tattoo. Or they can go to a bitch where James expose Alicia and gave her a public spanking.
The story is great and you have done a great job coming this far. Don't lose the touch now. Good luck for the next chapter.
