All Comments on 'Burned Ch. 14'

Could this " Burned " inspired by Nick Scipio, a Summer camp series? Although Burned is a side story by Big Ed Magusson. Some of your characters are the same.

If not, Google Nick Scipio and read the Summer camp series and you will love it and might be hooked on it like I do.

It is a nudist camp in South Carolina. A romance story about a boy who have two girlfriends. The boy's parents and one of his girlfriend's parents they discovered were nudists. Eventually as the insistent of her girlfriend, the parents eventually let them joined in their private parties, (Swinging) but they have rules that there's no sex between the parents and their own children. But can have sex with boyfriend- girlfriend's parents.

After the last chapter of book 2 (Gina), I fell in love with one of the girlfriend. The tall, the goddess as he discribed named Kendall.

Check it out.

When I started to read this series I thought it was going to be a gentle romantic love story between two cousins.

How disappointed was I when the mother became involved, even more so when Chris went to his friends Joe and Missy and got involved in a threesome with them.

At that point I stopped reading it.

When I started this is thought finally a.real love.story between cousins how wrong I was couldn't read.anymore.when mom got involved why did.you fuck it up.

don't listen to everyone else, I like where the story has gone

You started off very well but you stuffed it up 3/4 the way through by making you hero be an idiot and weak. I will have to think very seriously about anything else you write. Give your young males some balls

Are you going to finish this story.

The 1st few instaaments were nice but your trying to cater to way to many people at once the bondage and sub parts are not interisting to me at least but up to number 13 it was a great story