by elleem
Omg I loved these characters and had given up hope that it would continue. Such a treat to see this update. Welcome back and I'm looking forward to more soon:)
I am so glad to see more on this story. Hopefully we'll get more updates to this great story soon!
Love this story. I'm glad you updated. Please don't wait a year next time. This is turning into a good mystery novel with a lot of sexy thrown in. I love aspen and vary together. I'm excited to read about their morning after and see their relationship grow. Hopefully they will have a happy ending even with all the intrigue going on. You are an amazing writer. You craft your scenes and characters so well. Excited to read more from you
Great story! Loved the continuation..please please don't wait so long to update!
These two, are so hot together! Please try not to take so long to update. It's that good!
I have waited an entire year to read this next chapter!! FINALLY!! So hot! I look forward to the next chapter....sooner than a year from now though...PLEASE!! ;)
TM
Oh My God that was so good you had us all addicted to this series. Please don't take too long to post the next chapter!!!
please update soon. I do not think I could wait another year for the next upload.
Let's see. Hot sex? Check. Intriguing characters? Check. An unsolved mystery? Check. What's not to like? Like the others I'm asking for more. Thanks for a great read! Jeff
Hard to believe this is your first attempt at romance! Great story, awesome characters, you had me hooked from the beginning!! Can't wait to read more about these men and see how the mystery unfolds for our hero's/lovers!
Please don't make us wait too long. Wonderful story and characters. MORE, MORE, MORE, I AM BEGGING YOU....
WOW what an excellent story. You have such a talent. Please don't keep us waiting years for the next episode. Love it.
Please continue, i have been following this story and I don't want to wait a year. You're a talented writer. I'm hooked
I honestly wish I would be fucked like that, but this story is amazing and it needs, no, it deserves to be continued! !!
I've been following this story for 3 years, please continue it.love the mystery and the romance
Great story and explicit moments. Would love for this to be my first time. Still waiting. Yes yes!!
You are a gifted author. Seriously, you've created a compelling plot and your sex scenes are incredibly hot. I hope you're able to write more.
Could you please continue and finish this story? It's been more than 4 years since you started it. This is my second time reading all the chapters. You had me bricked all over again. C'mon, don't be like so many of the others and leave us hanging.
I know it’s been three years since you posted this chapter, but I’m still holding out hope you’ll come back. Please finish the story! I (and apparently a bunch of other people) absolutely love it and would hate to see it go unfinished!
wish you would come back to finish this --- what happened to Aspen + Cary ? where were you taking them and us?
am so hoping you will read the comments and find some time to finish your story -- it is really a terrific read with a side of mystery and now you left us adrift ! Come back and finish what you started PLEASE !!! we have to know what happens to Aspen + Cary
Like most comments before, I concur, please write more! Also - someone needs to turn this into a film. : )
I don’t know why I continue to torture myself coming back to see if you’ve uploaded more. I hope one day you can finish this wonderful story,
Finally, wow that was very hot ! Keep writing ! That was so hot. What a great story !
Please update. I simply must know where this story is going. I took a chance on you and so far your writing is amazing! Please continue.
You can’t leave us hanging like this! It’s cruel! :-) PLEASE finish the story! Hugs!