All Comments on 'Bus Adventure'

I enjoyed this story. A very sexy fantasy.

This story needs to be continued. What else can I say?

I would love to be on this bus. Have a definite thing for redheads. Please continue this fantasy thread, but don't make me wait too long or I will die of frustration.

I think this is a fantastic story - but then I would, wouldn't I? hehe

I enjoyed this story, and agree with other respondants. A follow up to this story would be much appreciated.

Very sexy! I like the writing and the idea. Makes me want to ride the bus! Of course, it would only be the beginning I think. Hmmmm. Like the way she suggests he move to the floor...

Beutifully written. Very sexy.