All Comments on 'Bus Ride to Albany'

by kennylong

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
Awesome tale!

Reminds me of a older woman I had in my youth. Nothing like a good looking older gal to teach a young guy the ropes. Nice going!

CAP811CAP811about 16 years ago
well told

Good narrative, just enough story to keep it interesting.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
Maturity offers special pleasures. In the sense of

a plausible and considerate sharing of pleasure between generations. Thanks for the well rendered yarn.

cheesy80scheesy80sabout 16 years ago
Wonderful story, well told.

That was a great story. The dialogue alone made it believable (assuming it's true anyway) and even touching.

walkerlongwalkerlongabout 16 years ago
Good job.

This story was nicely paced and the characters were well drawn.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
Good work

An enjoyable romp, evenly paced, kept my interest going and reminded me my youth too, highly credible scenario. Sensitively done also.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
Good story

I enjoyed the story, it was believable even with the age difference between the characters. I grew up in Albany myself, so the only thing that could have made it better was a few more specific place/street names. :)

backwoodsman1952backwoodsman1952about 16 years ago
Great story, welcome back

It is good to see you writing again. This is a great, arousing and totally realistic story. Please add a chapter.

venuzianvenuzianabout 15 years ago
Nice!

Your story caught my eye because I used to take that same miserable ride from Port Authority to Schenectady, Never met anyone interesting in all my years of traveling though. I really enjoyed your descriptive style.

venuzianvenuzianabout 15 years ago
Nice!

Your story caught my eye because I used to take that same miserable ride from Port Authority to Schenectady, Never met anyone interesting in all my years of traveling though. I really enjoyed your descriptive style.

chytownchytownabout 5 years ago
Good Storytelling****

Late sixties early seventies were sexy times for free love for the old and the young!! Thanks for sharing.

gunmakergunmakeralmost 4 years ago

Another great read.

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