All Comments on 'Bus Stop Girl'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Simply fantastic! Please continue!

I cannot wait for the sequel!

NanciNastyNanciNastyalmost 11 years ago
Amazing!

I sure can't wait for more either!! What will you do to me next?? :D

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Hot stuff!

Hot stuff! Can't wait to find out where this one goes. I can relate to Nanci and want you to take her in every way!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago

Oh god yes that is one hell of a story. Please never stop writing. I love this I want this and I'm not into rope ;-)

This is a must read

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love it had to touch my self when reading

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
I'm so moved by this, it's like I'm there.

This is beautiful.. wonderful..

And that first paragraph made my heart leap!

I never told you I had worked in a books store nor that I had a friend Tina nor especially that there was a guy named Tom I had had a thing for ..and with back in the day. And there are other accuracies that were almost uncanny but I won't be specific. It's like you are tuned into me. And not to impune your masculinity or anything but this almost seemed like it was written by a woman or at least written for a woman. Like the most exquisite erotica... not the usual smut porn I read from most any other man. And so realistic and amazing. I can almost see her. I hope you will find someone like her in your real life. I know she is what you really want. Not someone like me. I feel almost jealous of her but you are willing to share your vision of her with me so it's a good thing. I'm almost nervous what you will have her do with and to me. I have never had anyone like her but what a dream.. what a fantasy.. what a vision. I find myself wanting her in a deep way.. from my mind to my heart to my pussy.. all the way to my toes. Even if you don't write another word of this story I am so happy with your effort and your style and your sensitivity to me. I want this to my core. Kissing you now in my mind sweetly and deeply... I am yours to do with as you wish. xoxoxox

elausenteelausenteover 10 years ago
perfect muse

Only her can inspire such a scintillating fantasies

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