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ImNotanAnonImNotanAnonabout 2 months ago

This isn't worth more than a 2.

26thNC26thNC2 months ago

He married a slut, and she went downhill from there.

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

Four stars - would have been five until that miserable ending with the magnificent Kikeo limped in!

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

Gosh, another cuck that had to stick it into Heather second time round

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

Stupid asshole writer with his weak wimpy cuck male characters desperate for skanks

jflindersjflinders4 months ago

I don't like stories where the guy reconciles with a girl who has shown her values aren't consistent with a committed, respectful relations, marries her and finds she is what she'd already shown herself to be.

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

5 Stars on a good story . I went through the same thing as I was 1/3 owner of my CPA office . My ex hit on more guys then I felt comfortable with . I was not a great dancer and she liked to drink and dance . One of our oldest clients drooped us . I guess My ex and one of my Partners got stoned with his married son . He did not like it and neither did i . I now have a small business that I own by my self . I am glad we had no kids

Oatmeal1969Oatmeal19695 months ago

First three pages were pretty solid set up, last page was a bit too brief and gentle on the cheating wife. Still enjoyed it, just wanted the promise of the first half of the story fulfilled by the second half. Thanks.

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

Just. Plain. Dumb.

AngelRiderAngelRider7 months ago

This is the kind of story that tells me whether the author is a hack or has talent

Ask me which one

AngelRiderAngelRider7 months ago

Who cares. The story was dumb

slowhand21slowhand218 months ago

Her MBA must have been worthless if she needed to whore herself to make a living.

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

A good story till the stupid ending with the girl from Japan who might be 'the one".

JackInYerBoxJackInYerBoxabout 1 year ago

So, in a nutshell, the guy marries a woman who has shown him she is a flirty, slutty, disrespectful, spiteful bitch, then is pissed and divorces her for being a flirty, slutty disrespectful, spiteful bitch?? Clearly, the protagonist is a moron.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Uggh. This story works to hell in a handbasket. He engineered her descent with Phil to get the prenuptial. Then it really went off the rails. The husband was principled and honored until suddenly he was not. Wtf?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Wife got off to easy. Though protecting the kids made sense even though she deserved to be ruined.

nixroxnixroxabout 1 year ago

3 stars - I really do not see the necessity to have a marriage, when a pre-nupt legal contract is far more useful and can include almost every possible circumstance for a separation.

Really a marriage license is only a piece of paper and the legal system plus lawyers, are geared to disregard everything but the children and their expensive ransoms laughingly called 'fees for service', but more like a prostitute 'fee for service'. My wife and I have been married for more than half a century. Two of our four children never got married and they are still together - the other two have divorced and one about 5 times. I would never get married again - I am so not like my father, who has out lasted 3 wives without divorcing any of them.

Norseman123Norseman123over 1 year ago

A leopard can't change it's spots and a woman once a slut always a slut. 5*

nogravynogravyover 1 year ago

Smart, fast-moving story. The characters were well-defined without belaboring the point and the plot was tight and well thought out. 5-stars from me.

WetheNorthWetheNorthover 1 year ago
quote kids' mother unquote

It has been awhile since I have seen this cliché used

sbrooks103xsbrooks103xover 1 year ago

"never, I repeat never, a slow song." - To me, it's no much that it was a slow song, but It had taken him three months to get that close to her.

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60/40 just because he makes the most money is bogus. If the business AND the house are off limits, then everything else should be 50-50 if no cheating.

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"Ken told me eyeing up one of the girls." - What do the partners' wives think of the women?

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"Steve, I'm sorry, I needed the money to live on." - As I saw in another comment, what about her accounting degree and MBA?

SeaChangerSeaChangerover 1 year ago

Very realistic story. I read every word. He managed his wife and business carefully and succeeded taming both, despite their disruptive and unethical behaviors. 5*

SeaChangerSeaChangerover 1 year ago

System error ?

Very realistic story, I read every word. He managed his business and personal life very carefully, and despite the disruptive and unethical behavior, managed to tame his wife and dump his partners. 5*

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

I know it is only a story BUT if you marry a self centered conceited slut what do you expect ????(jaybee186)

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

This story crawled into the sewer by page 2.

"You still have feelings for her? Implicit in that is love? How about appropriate distain and disgust! Then, going back to her?

The MC is brain dead, self catrated idiot.

I loath the cheap troph tool, feelings, to float and carry an idiotic story where the man is so needy he walks into betrayal and cuckdom WILLINGLY then is devastated after he is fucked over.

This is the last of your stories I'll read.

Good Job! Permanently lost a reader in tje first 10 pages!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

sorry.. the MC seems to be too tight an asshole with an exagerated opinion of himself

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

This story went to hell quickly. I get that the wife was a big flirt and loved attention but that doesn't mean she is a cheater. The husband purposely had the bartender not only take photos but keep pushing drinks to get her drop all inhibitions. Then instead of fighting for her, since he had wanted a way to enforce the prenup, he let her go off with the guy, Phil. Wtf? Then the story goes dumb. Here is a successful businesswoman with years experience as an accountant, who having a divorce and a child, starts a catering service with his business partners that lead to prostitution and blackmail sex (her and Ken). Wtf? This truly degenerated into crap. The MC didn't deserve what happened and Ken and Andy were assholes, but the MC just cut and fish bait early when he could have fought for the marriage. He had the prenup over her head and could always wait to get proof. He forced it! That is reprehensible. Getting her so drunk that she screwed up is not cool. It was an ambush! Yes the MC had a low tolerance for flirting or female arrogance (whatever) and had the mentality of someone from the 19050s, but he still has a moral and honorable character. Until that one night (and after) when he chucked it all away. Stupid.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Ok. I did like the story. But I think that allowing the company parties to downgrade into prostitution was a little too much. First off, women are much more aware of ‘ social cues” than men. No way the wives, wouldn’t have figured out what is going on. Second, by hubby “ paying her for services rendered” wasn’t he tactfully accepting the role she played at the party? And WHY would a partner try to force someone to work with their ex wife? ALL of this made no sense, from a business perspective. I did give it a 5, but wifey might have gotten all her holes filled, but not the story..

CHUCK2468CHUCK2468almost 2 years ago

You need to stop smoking what ever you are. You started your story with a strong willed MC then by the next page he was turned into a world class loser and pussy. Did you accidentally combine 2 stories into one? The premise was good but you obviously didn't have a clue with this one. Took 4 pages for him to finally man up, and even then he went from loser and pussy to pathetic. No way near your usual work. 1*

CHUCK2468

GuyfromShadesGuyfromShadesalmost 2 years ago

Great story, I enjoyed the read. Thanks for your writing.

xhristianjxhristianjalmost 2 years ago

What made me laugh was your cuckold protagonist allowed his wife to basically do whatever the fuck she wanted in their Marriage. Let his partner's do whatever the fuck they wanted in their Business. And then his big revenge plan after his partner's and his ex-wife fuck him over literally was to give his ex-partners wives control of the company?

Like for fucks sake what an absolute waste of ball sacks!

etchiboyetchiboyalmost 2 years ago
@Last anony.; re paperwork

… else you’d add a page or two of boring detail, which would probably have some of the details wrong, which would bring a whole slew of complaints in and of themselves. Therefore ‘The owners shares were given half to the divorcing wives’.

The classic “black box” of A goes to B goes to C goes to — (then hand waving) — and thus result Z.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

And just how, (in your universe) do you simply wave a magic wand and give someone's shares to someone else without them knowing or agreeing?

You can't just "file paperwork" at a court.

Rancher46Rancher46over 2 years ago

I liked the story and Heather got her comeuppance in the end for her actions. I guess once a slut always a slut. ⭐⭐⭐⭐

RimmerdalRimmerdalover 2 years ago

Finish the story. Even if someone else writes it.

hicountryriderhicountryriderover 2 years ago

Great character development and very good story.

Rational and expected behaviors for circumstances in the story.

In respect above a realistic impossible stray line.

FlynnTaggartFlynnTaggartalmost 3 years ago

4 stars. Seemed strange he was still so kind to his ex despite constantly disrespecting him and definitely odd he was still willing to work with his ex friends who were trying to drive their business down the toilet. Seems so strange he'd still be working with them after their attitude towards him and his (by their viewpoints) ruining their marriages and fun.

Beast1961caBeast1961caalmost 3 years ago

Liked it, but didn't love it... these type of stories are beginning to make me reminisce, and it's not a great head space. Maybe I'll go back to watching anime.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Don't really get why he lets his kids hang out with a hooker/pimp.

Huedogg2Huedogg2almost 3 years ago

I would have turned that disc over to the cop, I don't want my kids mom in jail, Hell I don't want my kids around a hooker either.

amygdalaamygdalaabout 3 years ago

Hooray for the pre-nup it saved the day.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

Wow

You wrote one without a RAAC .

Nice

Freddog6601Freddog6601about 3 years ago

This belongs in the Masochistic genera, it’s not a true LW piece as the main character continually signs up for pain and humiliation.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
he got what he deserved

I really can't sympathize with the main characters in stories where the guy gets stupid and marries the chick that has already shown what she is, then feels hurt when she is what she is.

swedishreader1swedishreader1over 3 years ago
Well.

That was stupid.

The husband was written like some puritanical fanatic, obviously in the attempt to make him appear tough and morally upstanding that went seriously overboard.

The wife character was also poorly written.

As was the fantasy of the custody of the children.

If it's supposed to be set in the real world it should be at least partially realistic.

P.s

The comment section on this story really does show who the rabid women haters are, that's for sure.

MarkT63MarkT63over 3 years ago

Great story!!! Thank God for the Pre-Nup!!!

26thNC26thNCalmost 4 years ago

Great story. He never should have married her, but when she acted up he didn't waste any time on her. Great revenge on a cheating wife who became a whore.

NitpicNitpicalmost 4 years ago
Deserve

He deserved all he got.He knew what Heather was like before he married her.

Artie88Artie88about 4 years ago
Stupid BTB

Really a waste of effort and time to read this crap.

I have nothing against good BTB that has a well thought out plot, with believable events, etc. But, this is just stupid, as if the author really thinks their audience is a bunch of brain dead idiots.

Who would think that the characters and events in this story could actually be anywhere close to real?

And, common to all BAD BTB, it is too long, too drawn out and too FUCKING boring

jimjam69jimjam69over 4 years ago
Good story

Can't be sympathetic to him as he had enough early warnings about her actions.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Typos or grammar mistakes or what?

Get a good editor.

jtwheelsjtwheelsover 4 years ago
She did it when they dated what did he expect

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She dancing (dry humping ) when they were on date he gets mad and leaves

And then expects better?

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Pretty Good Story

This story seems like pretty good anecdotal evidence that going into business with a partner, or partners, can end up being damaging to your emotional and financial stability. Of course going into business with friends could end up being worse. And of course marrying a slut doesn’t help. Makes me golden though, that’s three things I’ll never need to worry about: having business partners, having friends, or marrying a slut. ;-). Yep, I’m good. Thanks for the story, Slir.

Schwanze1Schwanze1almost 5 years ago
Again

Smart man stupidly marries a round heel slut while thinking with his dick and then pays resulting stupid tax. Slirpoofter only has one plot but still, he's often fairly entertaining

Schwanze1Schwanze1almost 5 years ago
Xtchr

Is exactly right. Fun story anyway

imhaplessimhaplessalmost 5 years ago
Entertaining

Need I say more?

GymShortsGymShortsalmost 5 years ago
5** ***

I believe Slirpuff was showing us what to many women do to men. Marry them and think they can change them then are disappointed when they don't change enough. Except Heather need to feel young again and had to have all the guys attention. However, Steve had the purse strings, pre-nupe and photos. He held all the cards and called Heathers bluff, too bad so sad.

Mauser45Mauser45over 5 years ago
Anon of 10/21/18

I try not to read 'actual' hotwife/cuckold stories, but you're right, the characters in there are the biggest, most pitiful of wimps. I like seeing cheaters (both bitches and bastards) get their comeuppance in the loving wives category. Sometimes, there's an element of detectivework involved, which makes the story interesting. I don't particularly like stories where people just roll with the punches, either

Mauser45Mauser45over 5 years ago
Slirpuff....

One of the blandest, most boring wimps to ever grace this site -_________-

GrimmerGrimmerover 5 years ago
4.5

Gave her and love a second chance and and she proved she couldn’t or wouldn’t change. Would like to see a version where he goes off on his own.

xtchrxtchrover 5 years ago
I Blame The Husband!

What I will never understand, is that when a girlfriend, fiance or whatever, acts like a slut and disrespects and humiliates her boyfriend/ fiance when they are only dating, why in the everlasting hell would he want her back and marry her?

As soon as he took her back, I knew where this story was heading and I didn't like it. That is why I blame him for bringing on his own misery, etc. by taking her back. It is very, very rare for a person to change a basic personality flaw.

Anyway, thanks for the story.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
UGH!!!

Not funny and not a good story! He's an ass because he KNEW what she was like and married her anyway then got all "uppidy" when she showed her colors! She always was a slut and he was always an asshole! He should have known better.

The one thing I TRULY HATE in these stories is when the author declares, "she was a shitty wife but a great mother"! LIKE HELL!! If she was a shitty wife she was a bad example and a shitty mother!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
I Am A Baptist

My brother is even a Baptist preacher. I have nothing against dancing. But when a man's wife rubs up against another man out on a dance floor in what can be described as "verticle sex", there is much to be said about that. It shows a total lack of respect for her husband and those in attendance. And, yes, if you take a tape of that action into a boardroom or divorce court, would you like your chances then?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
The author has to be Baptist

Because he thinks dancing is the worst sin of all.

Religious nuts are hilarious! Hahahaha!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
We missed your comment Huedogg2

This place has more and more cucks and wimps filling the comments with their faggot word about how bad the wronged husband treated the cheating slut. I'm not sure how it happened but no long ago there were only real men commenting. Now most of the comments come from closeted faggots and wimpy cucks.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Too funny for words!

I think Heather has her own tapes and burns the Agency and the men down to the ground. And then walks away. Besides, the Judge wouldn't give a shit about a pre-nup when it comes to custody and child support. He would have been paying thru the nose. Horrible, unrealistic ending.

Huedogg2Huedogg2over 6 years ago
typical comments

all the cuckold are pissed at the husband that doesn't want to be married to a slut. Heather didn't seam to mind all the perks she got for being his wife. And here's a question for all of you cuckold loving morons. If he sucked and was so fucking boring why did she want to stay married then? what's the saying that you idiot don't seem to understand...."A lady in the streets and a freak in the bed", no one what's a slut till the lights are off, most slut live lonely lives you dumb asses, like most whores....the only difference...WHORES are well paid!

johnadpjohnadpover 6 years ago
Steve Is A Piece Of Shit

Here are the reasons Steve is a piece of shit:

1. He admits his wife was a great mother, and even though he works 70 hours plus and has 2 children younger than 5 and Heather only had a part time job after the divorce HE took it on himself to have custody and only let her see the kids twice a week and then later even restricted that. He didn't even put his young children above his little pettiness and hurt.

2. Even though he had two children younger than 5 he made no effort to save the marriage even though the only evidence he had was that she was dressing sexier than he liked and she was flirting more than he liked. He had no evidence she was cheating or even going further than dancing closer than he liked her to dance. It's one thing if they were dating and that was too much for him, but he had two young children and he made no effort at counceling or anything to save the marriage, even if it was primarily for the sake of the children.

3. Like Heather said he became boring. All he did was work. The only evidence we have he took his wife out at all was to his company events for business purposes. Is it any wonder that that was the only place she had to let loose? I'm not saying she didn't go too far, but you pull on a 6 year marriage and destroy the world for two young children without making an effort to meet your wife even close to halfway?

4. After she was married to him for 6 years he gave she got $25,000 and had to live like a pauper. And what was her sin? Dressing sexier than he liked, dancing closer than he liked? Her circumstances even pushed her to prostitute herself as she claimed. He put the mother of his two young children in those circumstances because he was a petty little bitch. She gave up a successful career to take care of HIS children. And he conceded that she was a great mother.

5. Heather obviously loved him because she accepted marrying him even with the prenup and especially the part where the max she got was $25,000 and that was not for cheating, but for being more flirty than he liked. Obviously I cannot believe that part of a prenup would hold up as it's too subjective what the threshold was, but whatever.

Heather was right, he was an insecure jerk and she should have never got back with him. And they obviously were mismatched as he was very conservative and all he wanted to do was work and she was more adventurous and social. But with two young children involved he made no effort to even meet her close to halfway. He just threw her out "like trash" (as she predicted).

timrivtimrivover 6 years ago

Well I guess I have to disagree with the other comments on this story, the first half the story the husband acted like a jealous, possessive child with a huge ego who felt that his wife had to be like “June Cleaver” (Leave it to Beaver). He took her to the business get togethers to “work the crowd” with the potential clients but freaked out when she acted a little flirty and naughty.

She was a great mom according to the story and never cheated but because she didn’t act like a Morman wife he was upset.

He then divorces her and totally ruins her leaving her in a small apartment with virtually nothing. The partners wives like her and get their husbands to hire her to run the corporate parties as she has no money due to her prenup that they never signed but the Neanderthal husband had her sign.

So to make hubby look good the last half the story was designed to turn a flirty wife in a slut hooker. Totally designed to appeal to the BTB crowd of divorced woman haters.

Wish the author had written this to show how much of a control freak he was but in the end we see him looking for a (submissive) Japanese woman for a new squeeze.

The one question that was never answered was with an MBA in accounting why was she not running accounting department in the company and why was she not able to get a good job after the divorce? Guess than would have ruined the BTB ending.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Not this time

I made it somewhere on the second page before I lost patience with the character development and especially the dialogue that tired to support the unfolding of the characters. I got impatient, asking myself "why are you wasting time with this if it's so irritating?" Good question. I skipped to pg4 and this section. I've no idea where the story went.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Well

I read only the first page and desiderate he was an idiot for going back to the wicked witch.

networkgurunetworkgurualmost 7 years ago
Meh

You tried so hard in this story to make the protagonist no wimp or cuckold that he just comes off as an angry douche. No woman in her right mind would ever marry a guy like that

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Somewhat Manipulative

Big fan of Slirp. But when the husband brings up the prenup he does it in such a stupid and insensitive way, not communicating the truth of it: that he does not own everything, his partners are also owners and as far as the prenups they are all in it together with the wives - it's about making the business stronger and protected. But instead he stumbles, bumbles and mumbles like a fool. Fucking pathetic. And HE'S the one writing the copy, so it's extra pathetic.

The guy is just not likeable. He's a weak weenie man with no spine. First Slirp story I've ever bailed on. And that's my first dangling preposition of the day :((

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
@ Anonymous 12/20/15

I think you're the one that understands nothing. Due to the pre-nup, Alimony is null and void. Also, since she is living in a 1 bedroom apartment and has no job at that moment, The Judge would decide that the father having custody would be in the best interests of the children. Add on the testimony of witnesses that could collaborate her behavior and the video taken, that's the icing on the cake. Later with the sex on tape, he just keeps her from refiling for custody. All he has to do is submit the videos to the court of her prostitution.

pcthronepcthronealmost 8 years ago

"Steve, I'm sorry, I needed the money to live on."

On page 2 her words were

"Steve, I'm not an idiot. I've got an MBA and a degree in accounting,"

If she fucking had a MBA in Accounting why the hell did she need to earn money by Whoring herself out. She is a big time slut,whore... She could've got a job with her degree but no damn bitch did what she did the best fuck & whore around.

Bitch Deserved what she Got.

In One of the comments it was written pre-nup would save his company & house but he couldn't get whole custody.I agree with that point but at somepoint in story it was mentioned she couldn't afford to keep children.But anyways courts always give primary custody to mothers.

Chief3BlanketChief3Blanketalmost 8 years ago
How

An explanation of how the wives of his two partners were legally able to get full control of 50% their respective husbands stock in the business would have been nice.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
1*

why the fuck anyone would go out with a BITCH like that? the guy is a brain dead idiot.

sbrooks103sbrooks103over 8 years ago
Thoughts

“When another guy walked over and asked her to dance she was about to get up and go with him when I spoke up.” – Even if Steve WASN’T a “big one for dancing”, common courtesy requires that another “gentleman” ask a lady’s escort for HIS permission before asking her to dance, and a “lady” refuses any request made without that permission. And the fact that the other guy was dancing closer than he could at first is troubling.

“And you want me to sign away my rights to anything and everything” – No, just the business, anything else could/would be negotiated, including HER stuff!

"Steve, if you don't like the way I'm dressed just leave me home and go yourself." – I know he said he couldn’t do that, but he should have anyway!

Heather asked if HE was done sulking. I thought SHE was the one shutting HIM out.

Again the “fighting” for her. The fight SHOULD be over after the wedding, SHE should be fighting for her marriage, PRESUMING that it matters to her!

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Another stupid male fantasy

His pre-nup could stop Heather from getting a piece of his Company. He could have precluded her from getting his house. But no way in hell does the pre-nup give him custody. That is a Court decision, made after the children have seen a psychologist appointed by the Court. She would have gotten custody. She would have gotten alimony and she would have gotten child support. Anything else was complete nonsense. You seem to understand NOTHING about the divorce laws in the US. Get a clue. Even for fiction, this was ludicrous.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Pappy7 must be saying something right...

One jackass says he's Taliban, another says he's MSNBC. He must be holding up a mirror to the jackasses.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
pappy7 your an asshole

You sound like a man hating liberal bitch from hell.

nowhere in this middle of the road story does he become a bastard until well after shes starts disrepecting him and there marrage and continues throughout the rest of 4he tale.

when reviewing please leave your politics(very a wrong at that)

Out of it. Dumbass

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
pappy7

With opinions straight from the caves of Afghanistan.

I feel sorry for any woman who has the misfortune of having any kind of relationship with the likes of you.

I wonder if you saw your father discipline your mother for not having the dinner ready on time.

krosis666krosis666almost 9 years ago
There are hundreds of stories EXACTLY like this on Lit

Boy meets girl. Girl is slut that will end up being buried in a Y-shaped coffin. Boy marries her anyway, and is then amazed and surprised when she turns out to be exactly what the entire planet knew already. Boo hoo, nobody cares.

He referred to the size of her brain, and her mental capacity, more than once, yet he is IDIOT that married her. You don't sympathize with idiots, you just laugh when their idiocy bites them in the ass! Clint Eastwood said, in the movie 'Unforgiven'; "Deserve's got nothin to do with it". Sorry, Clint, but some morons deserve everything they get!

fifteen16fifteen16about 9 years ago
Analyse

One can try and analyse the characters in a story but all the reader can do is take them and the story at face value. Their values were different, life is about what is agreed acceptable behaviour in a marriage and how you project yourselves in public. These ground rules should be laid down before marriage and adhered to, this story is about two people with a different outlook on life and how to achieve their goals, they never were or would ever be reading from the same page. Or we can say he was an average man living within the accepted behaviour of society in private and public, whereas she had a different set of values. It's a funny old world.

VittorioDanielSaurezVittorioDanielSaurezabout 9 years ago
It was bad

Honestly, the characters were too much of a dick, the repercussion was badly done, there was no feelings in the dialogue and your protagonists was bland, boring and unidimensional.

Terrible story.

Drbeamer3333Drbeamer3333about 9 years ago
Enjoyed it

thanks for the offering.

Seeker1107Seeker1107over 9 years ago
They were both to blame!

The prenup was spelled out. There really was no room for ambiguity there. So why the hell did she do it? As far as custody the courts can rule on it but prenups do take precidence to a degree. Most of them though are not spelled out the his was. All of you fail to remember that he was under the same restrictions as she was. He sulked ad really needed to work on his communication skills. However 20\20 hindsight is great. Should he have just left her alone after the first time? Probably, but he didn't. He married her after they both agreed to the same terms. Now here is the kicker we don't know what happened after the birth of his eldest. He just remarks that he should have opened his eyes earlier. If he wanted to even try to save the marriage he should have tried for councelling after the first incident without name caling and just couch it in terms that he felt they were growing apart and he wanted to make sure they worked together to keep the marriage strong, not save it as that would have set the tone that he was just going through the motions as opposed to actually trying to save the marriage. So yes he flubed a chance as well. In the end we must remeber three things, first is that this is fiction. Second is that it takes two to tango, (she should have known how jelous he was from the first time and seen what her actions were doing to him) and she certainly went out of her way to push his buttons and to antagonize him with her behavior. Third thing is that while we all have all this relationship advice we aren't living with it every day with it in our faces. He was and it kept it front and center. They should never have degenerated to name calling. However perception is reality and in this case he perceived that she may not have been stepping out on him but she was doing her damdest to embarrass him at every chance. She perceived him as being overbearing controlling and trying to keep her tied down. Basically he summed it up in one sentence, "What we have here is a failure to communicate!".

Just MHO here.

Pappy7Pappy7over 9 years ago
Well, I guess that the previous anony

is a woman or at least a slut sympathizer because actual, physical intercourse is only the last manifestation of cheating. All of the disrespect and emotional effort that goes into the building of an affair to reach that point is cheating too. And with an attitude that it's ok up until the fucking, I would hate to be your husband, miss anony. I would bet that most husbands wouldn't care to be treated like Heather treated her husband, in front of his friends and business associates no less. Not good for a business or personal reputation when that happens.

I appreciate the story, it wasn't a wimp or a Rambo story, either one. Thanks for letting the man have morals and principles that he refused to compromise for a good looking woman like in many other stories in this category.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
have to agree with a previous comment

Any man who calls his wife a cunt when she has not physically cheated is a lowlife piece of crap.

the husband in this story was a massive asshole of the highest order.

The wife could have behaved much better, but even the best chef cant cook with shit.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Truly a story with excellent meanings

If you skip through the sex the parties the story lines that make for Literotica, you have a really good story that tells all. In basic terms that pre nuptials really did save his bacon. Lets face it Heather was never the sit down and be the wife and mother type. Her desire to party never left her and for Heather to even think that Steve was the same or even changed into a wild stallion? The point for me, the pre nuptials exist and is a powerful tool that legally protects you. I should know, my wife of 10 years broke hers to me. What was important is knowing when your gut tells you and your head does too. follow them and above all protect yourself. A divorce un protected can cost you at a minimum of 50 percent of everything and the spouse does not have to put in a dime to anything you have (coming into the marriage) that is why there is caution about gold diggers ( catchy term but fits) Great story and definitely something to keep with you and ponder for your financial future if you decide to marry.7268

SpencerfictionSpencerfictionover 9 years ago
Good stuff

Good story well told with a nice finish.

tazz317tazz317over 9 years ago
THE ROOTS OF LOVE NEED TO NURTURE

to stem the attack of weeds and icky" crawlers. TK U MLJ LV NV

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Another Money = Right story.

So what would happen if Heather was the one owning the company and hubby had to sign a pre-nup? With high probability, hubby would have to sit alone in the dancing hall watching his wife hip grinding strange men. Then he would have to beg her to be allowed to come home with wife and stranger and watch them screw. Then he would have to beg to clean out her cream pie. Because if he doesn't beg, he'll get kicked to the curb with nothing but the clothes that he wears.

I really hate stories where money plays a large part of the premise. Hubby wins because he's rich. Give me a break.

FD45FD45over 9 years ago
Unpopular reassessment.

This story is a target rich environment.

Look, I don't like her dressing like a hooker, I don't like her dirty dancing with other people, and I don't like her trying to 'rent a stud'. She was trying to be quirky and daring and had huge self esteem issues.

Here is the thing: These problems came up, and his response was anger. More anger. Sulky anger...more sulky anger. Communication? What's that? In the text, she asked many times to talk. MANY times. She apologized a number of times too and obviously knew when her anger and drinking caused her to go too far.

She'd fuck up, he'd ignore her...she'd try to get his attention by acting up some more...he'd drive her further away.

A husband doesn't have to be a therapist, but GOD he didn't seem to try to fix anything! BUT...she was the worse actor, but it isn't as clear cut a story as it first appears.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Good story - maybe not reality

I think in a pre-nup he could and did limit her payout. But what he couldn't have done is preclude her getting primary custody. At that point all he had was some pictures of her behaving badly. No where near enough to stop a Judge, any Judge, from giving her custody and child support. You can't place any limitations on child support in a pre-nup. The Courts decide that. SO she got custody and child support. Maybe even alimony or enough money to get a decent place to live for her and the kids. A Judge can alter the pre-nup where the children's welfare is the primary concern. I don't think this would have gone the way you wrote it. Not a bad story but not in touch with reality.

KarenEKarenEalmost 10 years ago
Why Be With Her At All

After that first fancy date when she showed no respect for him by dancing with other guys against his wishes, he should have just gotten over her.

KarenEKarenEalmost 10 years ago
@Anonymous BTB

What about this story is cuck?

He consistently stood up to her slut ways, when she went too far he dumped her and held her to the pre-nup.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
Great Story!

...and - so many negative commenters with no grasp of reality of real life.

He was in love with her, she was a self centered hot bitch, loved attention, turmoil and control so...like any man who sincerely, deeply and truly loves his wife - he is a little blind to her conduct (after the divorce) (he dealt respectfully with her by the way he divorced her), isn't a wuss, just didn't want to know anything about her until a good client filled him in and then...he handled matters quickly, professionally and decisively...Period!

Was he a wuss - hell no. Does he still love her - sure, he genuinely always did and real caring love never completely goes away and besides - he has two children by her and they like to see their mother!

Thanks for a Very Realistic and possibly true to real life possibilities story!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
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A cunt is a cunt is a cunt. Waaaaah!

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