Business Before Pleasure

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Gary and Marcy Dunn hoped to have a lot of fun at the business convention they would be attending. It wouldn't be from the meetings, which they expected to be dull as usual, but they planned on having their fun after the tedium was over. A visiting National Football League team would be staying in the same hotel as the conventioneers and that would mean a number of large, young men, many of them black, away from their wives and girlfriends and looking for some good times.

After the day's business, which was as dull as expected, the conventioneers waited near an elevator door until they saw two large young black men, whom they took to be football players, enter. Marcy and Gary hurriedly boarded the car immediately after them, pressed the button for their floor and were lucky enough for Marcy to get a position where she was standing directly in front of the taller of their quarry. When the elevator began to rise, she pretended to stumble backward until her ass was pressed against him and her right hand ended up over the crotch of his apparent teammate.

"Excuse me," she muttered.

"That's alright," he answered.

To Jamaal, it was more than just alright; it was great. The sexy plump white woman who had just stumbled into him had the kind of body he loved having held against him. She was tall with a big, luscious booty which, rather than removing from contact with him, she was grinding into his crotch. Her right hand, he noticed, also hadn't been moved away but was petting the cock of his teammate, Wesley. It looked to him as if he and his buddy wouldn't have to worry about what they were going to be doing that evening.

He had clearly just received an invitation so he answered by moving in closer and reaching up to fondle the woman's big breasts. Wesley responded to her in much the same way, also moving closer and enclosing the woman's hand in his own and gently wrapping it around his cock, which was stiffening. The men were not concerned about being noticed because there was a portly white man, who had boarded the elevator at the same time as the woman, standing directly in front of her. They had no way of knowing he was her husband; they just knew they could get away with some friendly fondling, which they believed would probably lead to a lot more after they left the elevator.

Whey their floor was reached, Marcy turned her head to look up at the men behind her. "This is our floor," she whispered. "Coming?"

The football players hoped they would be doing that several times before the evening was over, but Jamaal just nodded his head. Wesley didn't say anything but he closely followed the sexy woman when she started toward the open door. She placed her hands on the shoulders of the man in front of her and he led the four out the door, where they stood until after the elevator had continued on its way.

"I'm Marcy and this is my husband Gary," she began the introductions. I hope you don't mind if he watches." Neither of them expressed any objection.

"My name is Jamaal."

"I'm Wesley."

With the introductions finished, Gary led the others down the hall to the suite where he and his wife were staying and opened the door. When all were inside, he closed the door and locked it with the security locks. They all knew what they wanted, so they hurried through the sitting room to the bedroom where the light had been left on and the bed was already turned down. All four tossed their ties and suit coats or wraps on conveniently-placed chairs and sat down to remove their shoes and socks or stockings before looking expectantly at the woman who would be the center of their cavorting.

There was nothing coy about Marcy. "Unzip me, please," she said as she turned her back to Jamaal.

He eagerly pulled down on the small tab and the excited woman pushed her dress sleeves down her arms and off around her hands. While the big man removed her bra after fumbling with the catch, Wes pulled the snug-fitting dress around Marcy's hips and down her legs, where it turned into a satiny puddle on the floor. She kicked it away from her bare feet and stood displayed in nothing but her panties. The two football players stared lustfully at her big, curvy ass and her breasts as they bounced and swayed with her movements.

She wanted them to do much more than just look and, with a hand in either of their crotches, led the pair to the bed, where they sat down and she knelt in front of Wes. Marcy had felt his cock while they were in the elevator, knew how thick it was, and was eager to feel it spreading open the lips of her pussy before stuffing her mouth. She started by unbuckling his belt and unhooking the waist of his slacks and, after pulling down the zipper on the fly, she hooked her fingers in the waist. Wes raised his ass from the bed and watched while the sexy white woman pulled his pants down and off around his feet. As he watched her actions, his hands were busy with the buttons on his shirt and, after he finished, he tossed that garment on the floor on top of his pants and her discarded clothing.

That left the man wearing only a pair of jockey shorts and Marcy looked with lust at the dark bulge straining the fabric. Carefully, she worked the elastic waistband over the object of her desire and grinned lewdly when Wes's big cock sprang to attention under her face. After pulling his shorts the rest of the way off, she gently held the rigid shaft in one hand and started licking the head in concentric circles until the big, purple mushroom shape was nestled entirely within her lips.

Gary had removed his own clothing and his cock, although much smaller and paler than the one in his wife's mouth, was also hard. He moved in for a better look because one of his favorite things to watch is his wife's head bobbing up and down with her lips around a big, black cock as was starting to happen then. She did not disappoint him and her mouth was moving the way he liked with every stroke engulfing more of the stiff shaft that he knew felt so good to her and looked so good to him.

Jamaal was interested too, but not just in watching his teammate being sucked off. He removed all his clothing, knelt on the floor behind Marcy and placed his hands on the big, soft cheeks of her ass. She felt as good there as she looked and he started to pull the panties down.

Marcy turned and grinned lewdly at him. "Let's all get up on the bed first," she suggested.

Nobody had any objection to that. The convention-goers had hoped for some very large men to join them so they had made a point of getting a king-sized bed in their suite and there was enough room for all four sexual adventurers. Gary moved over to the far side to be out of the way until the activity heated up. Wes was lying on his back, a pillow under his head, while Marcy was on her hands and knees between his widely spread legs. Jamaal was kneeling behind her and the first thing he did after getting in the new position was to finish pulling her panties down. She raised her knees one at a time to let him pull them all the way off and toss them aside, leaving everybody on the bed equally naked.

In anticipation of what they were going to be doing and the sight of the luscious ass and pussy in front of him, Jamaal's cock was fully erect. The aroma of the juices that were dripping from the woman was also a big turn-on for him, as was the sight of her fingers reaching back under her body to spread the lips of her pussy for him. Holding his cock in his right hand, he started to rub the head in the wetness to cover it with her natural lubrication.

When Gary saw this erotic sight, he moved in more closely, his hand on his own stiff shaft. Jamaal had no objection to the husband watching and he even started holding his cock in his other hand to provide a better view. When Marcy's juices were spread well enough, he gave a firm push and the head wedged its way into the wet hole that wanted it so badly. Gary saw the initial penetration of his wife's pussy by the big, black cock, another of his favorite sights, and started slowly masturbating.

Everybody was having a great time but Marcy was having the best of all. Wes's cock was not being sucked as it had earlier because she had stopped in order to get onto the bed and start getting her pussy crammed full by his teammate. Wanting to make it even better for herself and the man who was being left out temporarily, she started licking the head of his cock, lowering her face so her tongue was travelling in concentric circles. When the big, purplish mushroom shape was fully nestled between her lips, she began to engulf the rest of his cock while her tongue kept caressing his stiff shaft. Marcy loved the sensations of her lips being spread by the thick organ while her mouth was being filled to capacity.

Jamaal had buried every inch of his shaft in the dripping white pussy in front of him and was resting his hands on the woman's succulent booty. Slowly, he drew away until most of his cock had been withdrawn, paused, and drove the entire length back inside. Marcy moaned from the exquisite pleasure but the sound was mostly muffled by the mouthful of hard black cock she was relishing so much.

Over and over, he plunged his stiff cock into the pink, dripping wet hole that was so hospitable while Marcy fucked back to meet him. Her body was swaying from side to side while her knees drove in and out of the mattress like pistons, also at the same tempo as the massive organ that was fucking her. Avidly, with his hand pumping at the same pace, Gary watched his wife's pussy as it was being repeatedly stuffed by the big black cock that was giving her so much joy. He was having just as much fun and hoped Jamaal wouldn't come too soon, even though the best part of the sexual adventure would happen then. For a slightly different kind of fun, he moved toward the head of the bed so he could watch Marcy's mouth enveloping and releasing the other long, thick cock.

She was also letting Jamaal set the pace as she bobbed her head over Wes's lap. With every stroke, she gave him deep throat, taking his cock so deeply into her mouth that her lips and tongue was being tickled by his curly black pubic hair. As her face moved up and down, she watched his visage, relishing the grimaces of delight that flickered across his face and the way his body was writhing from the intense pleasure she was giving him. She knew he would come soon and was already anticipating the mouthful of cum he would be giving her but she continued at the slow pace being set by the man behind her.

It was not too slow for Wes. Everything about being sucked off by the woman in front of him was incredibly pleasurable. He loved the way she was looking at him adoringly with her warm brown eyes and the way her dark hair swung from side to side as she moved her head. Most of all, he reveled in the pleasure that swept through his body from where the woman's lips were holding his cock with the perfect amount of pressure and her tongue was caressing the entire length. He was also aware he would be coming soon but he hoped to derive as much fun as possible before that happened.

The trio continued like that until Marcy felt the cock in her mouth start to throb and, although Wes didn't say anything, she knew he would be coming within a minute. She tightened her lips and started sucking faster but stopped giving deep throat. She didn't want his cum shooting down her throat until she had fully relished the taste and texture. Gary saw his wife increase the speed of her strokes and only taking the cock part of the way into her mouth and watched raptly, knowing the best part of watching his wife sucking off the black man would be happening any second.

"Ahhhh," Wes sighed in joy and involuntarily thrust his cock forward more deeply into Marcy's mouth as he climaxed.

A big gob of cum landed on her tongue, exactly where Marcy wanted it. It had a rich, meaty flavor but she knew the man had not finished coming so she didn't swallow it yet. She kept sucking and was rewarded by a second spurt and a third, which were as delicious as the first had been. She continued until she was sure no more would be forthcoming and took the cock out of her mouth. Marcy held it upright so no cum would drip out and be wasted and swirled the thick fluid in her mouth, relishing the taste and texture until she finally let it slip down her throat.

Gary moved in closer, his stiff cock swinging under his body. He wanted the best view he could get of what his wife would be doing and she provided it to him. With her husband's face no more than inches away, her tongue slowly moved upward, cleaning the thick white semen off the black cock. The sight was so erotic to him, Gary once again clutched his cock in his right hand and started pumping rapidly. A rush of pleasure almost overwhelmed him and he climaxed, squirting his own semen onto the sheet.

Marcy saw him ejaculating but she had no interest in his cum. She had almost no interest in anything but the two black cocks, one of them plowing in and out of her pussy and the other providing her with a delicious ration of semen. After licking everything off the outside, she took the shaft, still hard, she noted, back into her mouth to suck all the rest of the cum from it. Moving slowly, pressing with her thumb and her tongue, she squeezed every drop out onto her taste buds. This mouthful was treated as the first had been and, after swallowing it, Marcy was ready to give full attention to the big shaft that was providing her pussy with so much fun.

Jamaal had been slowly plunging his cock in and out of her pussy while Marcy had been fucking back to meet every stroke. She had derived tremendous pleasure and hoped he had too but her main concern was having him come into her. She bowed her back to present him with a better target, supported the weight of her body on her forearms and turned to give encouragement to the man who was giving her so much joy. Marcy didn't believe he needed any more than he already had but she gave him some anyhow.

"That's the way, Dude. Keep fucking me like that and make me come."

As Gary watched raptly and Wes watched with much less interest, Jamaal did what the woman wanted. Over and over, he plowed his big cock into Marcy's pussy while she rocked from side to side and rammed her body back to meet him, all the while begging for more and faster fucking. She got that part of her wish. Less than two minutes later, Jamaal's climax welled up inside him; he gave a grunt and came, with a big burst of cum gushing into the greedy pussy before him. He didn't stop, but kept pounding his cock in and out until he had ejaculated three more times. He was through then, at least for the time being, and drew his cock slowly from the hole that had felt so great to him.

Marcy hadn't come, nor had she or Gary really wanted her to do so. So much semen had been pumped into her pussy, some of the thick white juices were starting to run down the insides of her thighs. Knowing what her husband likes to do after she has collected a big load of cum, she rolled onto her back next to him and spread her legs wide.

That was Gary's cue. He quickly moved over on the bed to kneel between his wife's knees and leaned forward to start licking off the mixture of fluids that were trickling out of her pussy. He began with her thighs, where the juice was mostly Jamaal's cum and, once he had cleaned off that, buried his face in more deeply to apply his tongue to his wife's crotch, catching the combined juices flowing from her pussy. That was his favorite part and he continued until he had devoured every drop of the juices that were available to him. Marcy helped by spreading her legs farther apart so he could get it all.

He knew she had not climaxed and he set about rectifying that lack. Having gotten everything from her crotch, his tongue began lapping between a pair of her inner and outer lips. The juices there were mostly her own but they were still tasty and he licked slowly, cleaning off every drop. When he reached the place where the two lips are close together, he tilted his head in order to fit his tongue into the seam between them.

Marcy was already in a high state of excitement and her body was thrashing about under her husband's mouth while she fucked up into his face. "Yes! Yes! Eat my pussy! She begged him.

She got her with because that was what Gary wanted more than anything, once he had licked off Jamaal's cum. He licked past her clit, then stroked his tongue directly across the swollen morsel which had pushed its way all the way out from behind its protective hood. From there, his avid tongue found its way back to her dripping pink hole and he licked up all the fresh juices before starting to do the same to the other pair of pussy lips.

Wes's cock was fully erect by that time and he considered punking the pudgy white man but decided against it. It would have been fun but he preferred women and decided to wait and fuck the man's wife instead. Jamaal was ahead of him there and he knelt beside Marcy's face and rested his cock on her lips. She smiled and licked off the mix of his cum and her own juices but didn't suck them out of the inside. She would be sucking hi off after she had come from Gary eating her pussy and she knew that glorious event was less than a minute away. Marcy didn't take the stiff cock into her mouth either because she was concerned about possibly biting it while she was climaxing and maybe putting him out of action for the rest of the evening.

This time, when he reached her clit, Gary knew Marcy was on the verge of coming so he wrapped his lips around the engorged morsel and started to suck. As his lips worked, so did his tongue, caressing the top and sides. He continued sucking and licking until Marcy sang out the happy news that she was coming.

Her hands grabbed the back of his head and her thighs squeezed him as if she never wanted him to escape. Her legs swung from side to side and her pussy jammed up against the face that was being held securely. "Oh god! Oh god! Oh god!" she cried out in delight.

Marcy continued coming for almost five minutes, exploding from all the lust the two big, black cocks had aroused in her. When she climaxed, her back arched, her pussy rammed against Gary's face and she howled something incoherent. After her orgasm, she relaxed completely, almost melting into the bed with her arms sprawled at her sides. Her legs were still draped over his shoulders and her husband left them there while he was feasting on all her fresh juices. When he had lapped up all of them, he backed away, dodging Wes who was ready to fuck and was holding his cock to guide it into the dripping pussy in front of him. Marcy reached down to spread her lips so he could more easily make full penetration.

She was ready for Jamaal too and smiled up at him and started moving her face toward him. Still using one hand to hold her pussy lips apart, the other held his shaft when she started engulfing it in her mouth. He moved in closer so she would be able to take the entire length. At almost the same time, The other black man's cock started to wedge into her and, no longer than a few seconds later, Marcy had one big black cock filling her mouth and throat and another providing extreme joy for her pussy.

As before, Gary moved from one part of the bed watching the two studs using his wife and her loving every minute of it. His cock was semi-erect and he held it in his hand to start stroking to the erotic sight. The night was a great one for him and his wife so far, and he expected it to get even better. He would come from stroking his cock; the two large black men would both come into his wife and she and he would devour the combination of their semen and her juices before he brought her to another orgasm. The meetings that day had been dull but this was more than compensated for by the tremendous fun he and Marcy were having after they were over.

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
LIKE YOUR STORY VERY MUCH, GAVE YOU A 4+ [4.4/5=88% (****+)]. This story was meant to be a jack-off fantasy & the author gave us jus that, a short & sweet jack-off fantasy

This is an erotic vignette. I is reasonably realistic. Those who think that things like this do not happen are wrong.

My first wife had the potential to become like the wife from the story. For her, if a man aggressively flirsts with her but I fail to intervene, she took it as a green lite to flirt back. If her dance partner starts to feel her she would dance with him for as long as slow music is playing. On one occasion, upon returning from the dance floor, she told me the guy is staying @ our resort & has asked her to join the beach volleyball activity. "You do not mind, my love, do you?" Touching on the dance floor was just a preview of things to come.

I had a STRONG VOYEUR SIDE & her teasing & flirting with men was rendering me mesmerized & paralysed to act. Being kinky, I enjoyed her haughty stuff.

26thNC26thNCover 5 years ago
Sick

Absolutely , without doubt, sick.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
my 53yr old BBC Hotwife

Hot story indeed. My mature white wife enjoys to pick up young black studs when we travel as well. She often will wear a very tight dress barely below her ass cheeks without a bra or panties wearing 4 or 5 inch slip on heels go to a west indies grocery store frequented by mostly black clientele in hopes of enticing a young hung stud out to our SUV where she will happily and very energetic suck him off swallowing every single drop of his cumload. And of course I watch it all from the front seat. Very much a BBC slut.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
Good Show!

I liked this story. The fact there is no assfucking. I get tired of the ass fucking. But thats just me.

Of course most of these tales follow a patern; Boy or girl meets or needs some fuckin. She goes down on a big cock, then fucks it. Extended story; husband & wife seduce some big cocked male, (or males) Wife takes action, hubby watches, gets off with a cream pie.

Ahhh but I being a voyeur, love it all.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
Sounds like Imaluker has its own issues.

Not sure WTF its problem is but "it" should get back on its medications. Unless the famous administrators are behind this bullshit.

ImaLurkerImaLurkeralmost 10 years ago
Let me `Splain` sumthin to you Lucy .......

There is no need for new categories, or moving stories to different niches.......

This is a comment I made on another story, and wanted to add it to this thread ......

Let me ask a question. If you write a story, and would like to `Publish` it on LIT, what is the very fist thing you need to GitRdun ? Hmmmmmm ..... A User Nym maybe ? Well what's wrong with requiring a User Nym if you want to `Publish` comments to the stories here on LIT ? What I'm saying here is do away with the Anonymous comments and voting, and require credentials to comment and vote. The majority of the really brash and nasty comments are from this character Anonymous. That sucker either doesn't need to sleep or is a Meth addict. This entity is all over the place here, every category, 24 /7 /365 ! Slash and burn LW. Slash and burn ROM. Slash and burn NOV, and on and on and on. If you want to play, you got to pay ! You see, that way one has to make up `It's` mind if they want to one bomb you and leave a nasty comment. If `It` pulls that stunt it is as simple as that little flag at the bottom of the comment box. Their `Toy's` have to be taken away from them before you get their attention. The way it is now, the Author takes the heat and the instigator just sits back and pulls his pud over a job well done !

It Ain't Rocket Science to get a User Nym around here either. It's not like you are applying to the FBI or NSA or CIA or NRA ..... Wait a minute, how did the NRA get in there ? (Although I've heard they make you sign on the dotted line in the Blood of your First Born Male Child) .... hehe You pick a Nym, Moniker, Handle whatever you want to call it, that is not already in use and a password. Wait a minute ..... With that kind of information being given out I would have to sign up for `Identity Theft Protection` .....

Let's face it, there are some people out there that are just not happy unless everyone else around them is miserable. My great grandmother was like that. They didn't have a wake, they threw a party. To give an example ..... cantbuymy, cantabidebyit (One in the same) has just been banned for the second time !!!! Oh Glory Day, and let the Angels sing !!! Now to let you in on a little secret ...... Ole cantgetitup does it for the attention and power it brings to him. Doing it anonymously don't Pinch his Butt just rite .... hehe He wants everyone and their mother to know he is a Big Tough Guy, and President of the He Man Women Haters Club !!!! He don't Subscribe to Misogynist's Anonymous !!! In other words he is a real head case. You have to feel sorry for him in a way .... NOT !

One Nym, One Vote and you get to comment. That I have to say could also be abused, but most entities will not want to jump through the hoops to go that far. As it is, Ole Anonymous can one bomb you 25 times if it wants to. It would have to know how to do it but it can be done. You can't do that if you have to have a User Nym. One Nym, One Vote because your vote is tied to your Nym ..... Geeee Why didn't I think of that ! Oh ..... I did .... Nevermind. Make it harder for these problem children to pull their stunts, and you will see some of the turmoil go away.

Me, Myself and I, as I see it, it's not so much the comments as it is the Abuse of the Voting System and Anonymous Email. As I see it, the `Bread and Butter` for LIT is the Author that posts `Its` work. No Stories, No LIT. Keep allowing the BS, and all the better Authors will find somewhere else to go, or just quit writing. I know this to be a fact ......

One suggestion to the Authors ..... Turn off anonymous comments. Let them Stew in their own Juices. They may One bomb you, but what they really get off on is saying something `Shitey` ..... Is that even a word ?

kemanderkemanderalmost 10 years ago
Wow!

When did the comments section become a bulletin board? SweetPrettyAss, You did a great job of telling your story and I appreciate a fun short story. More power to you. I felt that you developed your characters all they needed to be for a story of this length. Reading your offering was a nice relief from the often overwhelming seriousness of reading authors that go to much greater lengths, and of course character depths and it's a great change of pace to read a fast paced, quick and dirty story. Thank you for the entertainment. I wonder if these other folks commenting feel as strongly about the sports they watch on TV, since they have no viable way to vent their frustrations at their teams? Anyway, thanks again.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
my apologies to this author

I need to usurp this comments section to voice a few opinions from a concerned anon about the state of this site (in general) and this category (in specific). However, I WILL give you some feedback on this story; I did read it, and as always I appreciate ALL of the authors who contribute to this site so that folks like me have something to read. I think you succeeded in making this a "stroke story". Your descriptions of the sex were OK, and it was interesting to see a few sentences mixed in that described the mindset while engaged in the sexual activity. I think that it WAS good that you kept this short and contained to just the "main event". Over quickly, with no lasting repercussions, it was just quick fantasy fulfillment. Hey if that works for the two characters in the story, and for the readers who like that sort of thing, then congratulations on meeting your goals. But we all know that this isn't the whole story. How did this couple get to the point of having an open relationship? How do these kind of adventures affect the couple's intimacy and comfort with each other? How often do they do this kind of thing? Will they keep doing it forever, or just a limited time? Does Gary ever get to experience a threesome with 2 women, and have Marcy provide the bisexual "cleanup" duties? IOWs, is this an equal partnership in fantasy fulfillment, or just one-sided to HER benefit? So Author, how could you have improved this story? If there was more plot and character development, it might have had more to offer the reader. This was missing a lot of elements that would have gotten a casual reader engaged, (or "caring" about what happens) to the point where they would want to know what happens next, and eager for a second chapter. However, I suspect that was never your intention. This was only meant to be a short stroke one-off, and as such, many readers will take it or leave it, and VERY few will remember it. If that is OK with you, then so be it. But what this story most offers ME, is an example of a story placed in the wrong category. And thus, a tool to use to prove my point. This story would have been most suited to group sex. Secondary, it could have been Inter-racial (as it seemed it was a point that they were looking for athletic black men specifically for her fantasy). Once you introduce the creampie eating, it could be Fetish. The willing cuckold behaviors of the hubby ALSO point to fetish. But this is loving wives (?), why, because she is married and has sex in front of her husband?

This is the kind of problem with this category that has been outlined by Oshaw, and Laptopwriter in these recent PSA's that they have been posting. The message is OK ("Can't we all get along?"), we need to grow up as mature adults, accept different POVs, and stop hate-mongering in what truly has become an abuse of the comments section. Again, I apologize to SweetPrettyAss, because this too is an abuse of the comments, but sadly for an anonymous reader, there is no other way to voice an opinion on this site, to an issue that affects ALL readers of this site.

I started reading here over a year ago, and always thought it was a great strength and advantage of this site to open up to anonymous readership. I, (so do I assume many others) have good and valid reasons for choosing to remain anon. I ALWAYS have felt that I had something constructive to say in my comments, and if not, I don't write them. I ENJOY writing a comment that proves that not all of us are stupid, ignorant trolls, filled with hate, chained to a computer in mommies basement. There are definitely stories I have strongly disliked, but IF I mentioned it, I have always explained why. There have been stories that I have read with morbid curiosity, wondering how and why ANYBODY would want to experience that sort of thing?!? And there have been stories where the writing is SO bad, that it doesn't matter WHAT the message or plot was SUPPOSED to be, it is simply unreadable. (Technical errors- grammar, syntax, typos, continuity, confusing timelines, switching narration partway through with no warning, confusing dialogue where you don't know who is speaking, switching character names, opinions presented as hard facts, lack of research, lack of realism, too many suspensions of disbelief......and the list goes on). Pointing out these errors MAY help an author not repeat the same mistakes. Telling them to fuck off and die definitely does not.

When I started reading here, I was very interested in Loving Wives, but apparently (according to Laurel, and others here in control of this site), I never really understood the category. The fact that this debate rages today proves that I wasn't the only one. But I hope to get this opinion out, because neither side of this debate seems to share my view. I DID read the thread on the bulletin board, but am not allowed to comment on the thread. Laurel's definition of what the LW category should be, really falls short. The category deals with a cheating spouse. OK, but (as others point out) that covers BOTH sides of the argument. Really, though, I think that is too simplistic. That is the reason why LW is such a "dumping ground" for stories that should really be in other categories. It leaves way too much room for an overlap of subject matter. Even if my opinion doesn't matter to Laurel, I hope someone else can pick up on this.

I always felt that the Loving Wives category dealt with MARRIAGE first and foremost. There may or may not be cheating. But there was ALWAYS a discussion about marriage. So I present MY simplistic definition of LW:

complicated marital relations.

I dare say, the subject of marriage IS the fucking reason why the LW is the most aggressively read and loyally followed category on this site. Most of the world gets married. Many fuck it up. Lots would like to hear about other people's experiences ( to learn from mistakes, or even take advice, or just to share varied experiences).

Marriage can be about the greatest love and joy, OR it can be about the most horrific pain and regret.

I think it is no accident that MORE people celebrate the revenge/consequence stories, then the complete cuckold/humiliation stories. Laurel, what kind of stories are at the top of the hall of fame for the LW category? How many "cuck" authors have developed as loyal a following that has lasted YEARS as compared to the so-called revenge/consequence authors?

Why is this?

Stories that center around revenge, by and large, tell a more complete story to the evolution of the total marriage. (ie: a complicated marital scenario). SOME willing cuck stories do this as well, and I think you find that those that do ALSO rate higher than most of the others from that side of the fence.

Lets be honest, for a story to be popular, it needs to feature a character the reader can identify with. The cuck/humiliation stories (which REALLY belong in fetish) usually don't offer ANY likeable characters, and seem intended to be written with the intention of pissing people off (JUST LIKE THE HATEFUL COMMENTS WE ARE SO WORRIED ABOUT NOW ARE DOING).

But YES, it does work both ways. The over-the-top revenge stories involving murder, castration, and overly stereo-typed characters who just happen to be a navy seal/computer geek/billionaire tend to be just as panned and hackneyed and don't fair too well in the ratings or comments either.

May be there IS a place for both types of stories in LW, or may be they should ALL be removed to other, more appropriate categories, but where does that leave the middle of the road stories that are left? You know, the ones that deal with real emotions of real people, that face real problems, and teach the lessons about what the best marriages are (or at least should have been) all about? Where will the in-depth character studies, and emotional roller-coaster rides dealing with loss, pain, and regret go? Is that really what the romance category is for? If you say it is, I say bullshit! No more than a man sucking on another man's dick belongs anywhere other than gay male!

Finally, I (in a tongue-in cheek manner; but no less seriously) figured out who is to blame for all of the confusion in LWs.

JUSTPLAINBOB!!!

Here you have one of the most prolific and enduringly popular contributors to this site. Almost ALL of his content has been placed in LW. But why is he to blame? He made it a mission to write EVERY type of story, with EVERY type of twist and kink available. If you don't like one JPB story, keep reading, you'll eventually find one that you do. He, as an author, DELIBRATELY tried to offer something for EVERYBODY! However, instead of posting throughout every category, he assembled bits and pieces from every category to feature in his LW contributions.

But I see him as the PIONEER of "anything goes" for the LW category. Problem is that most authors can't do what he did. They feel most comfortable telling just one kind of story. If that is a restriction an author places on themselves, then they need to find the category that they feel the most comfortable in, and build up a readership within it. But here is the great irony of the whole debate. People WANT to post in LW, (just like it is, and has been) even if it isn't the most appropriate category because they KNOW that is where the story will be read by the most sets of eyes (including the Anon's!). Laurel's attempts to destroy the category by making it one-sided will only serve to hurt this site, and turn BOTH readership and authorship away.

So yes folks, tread lightly. Don't assume all Anons have zero value. Stop acting like children (Carvohi's recent temper tantrums come to mind). Can'tbuyme/ Can'tabideit is one of the worst offenders of the hate/vitriol that Laurel "doesn't want to deal with". Funny, but seems to me that getting slammed by HarryinVA is almost a cherished rite of passage for an author, and it has been that way for YEARS! But anybody, member or anon, who can't find out what a constructive comment is supposed to be about, should just refrain from commenting. All of that said, the day when LW is absolutely nothing but poorly written willing cuckold stories, and censorship has moved any other type of story to other categories, and this forces all of the best writers featured here for years to be pissed off enough to find greener pastures on other erotic literature sites because in depth emotional writing is deemed too controversial, may be that will be the day that Laurel wakes up and realizes that she mishandled this site, and should have listened to her readership better. But more important than that, she should have listened to her most popular contributors even more. The PSA from Oshaw read like someone who was defeated and couldn't gain an audience with the higher ups. This is the guy with the No 1 story in the hall of fame right now. Doesn't Laurel care about his opinion? Slirpuff having stories moved without his approval is just going to make him want to STOP submitting stories. How is that making this site better for EVERYONE?

I should probably give up too, God knows I spend too much time reading on this site. But if you destroy the integrity of what brings me here (admittedly daily- but I'm not the only one....), I will leave too.

Please listen!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
Lets migrate to Story on Line

And leave Laurel with her type of storymakers.

oshawoshawalmost 10 years ago
scareyone

The site will not shut down. Viewers with your attitude will only cause authors of btb/revenge/consequences stories to be banished from LW. LW category will continue with cuckold/wife sharing stories regardless of what you want. Again, no one is asking you to like stories against your will.

Authors and readers of btb/revenge/consequences stories want to continue in this category. If this is so contrary to you, then may I suggest that you patronize SOL instead and allow us the opportunity to enjoy this site.

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