All Comments on 'Business Meeting'

I love how the siblings found each other. I love how that asshole got his at the end.

it could have used more inbetween the hotel and the film at the prison there needed to be something about how they got married and how they worked out the buissiness between the two companies which is why they were there in the first place unless that was a setup if it should have been explained a lot was left unsaid in the middle and needed to be brought up other wise it was good but think before posting and never leave big gaps in the story like you did here

I enjoyed your story. I thought it was very cleverly told. I look forward to reading more of your storys.

Well written with enough base to make the characters seem real.

A smoothly edited story which makes the reading flow well and kept it interesting.

Thanks for the good story

you left a lot of holes in the plot there should have been more about the two businesses and how they worked out the deal and how she moved in with him. there should have been some about her getting pregnant and him meeting his mom and aunt and the mom getting married. did she go to work for him and his partner what about the business deal some major gaps here time to rewrite and fill them in.

I really liked how you left it up to the readers to use their own imaginations. Some stories need a lot of extemporaneous details to plug gaping plot holes, but stories like yours are a delight to the more sophisticated readers here. Very well written and I hope to see more from you in the future.

hey good story i really enjoyed it, good twist to it....

That ending is pure cold-blooded vengeance. I liked it. Yet another good story where incest is a small part.

I loved this story and especially the deep love between brother and sister.