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AsbelAsbelabout 8 years ago

Well, that escalated quickly.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago

I am so wet now, I am ready for that trip. Bring it on. . . Loved it and want more.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago

Nice quickie!

reader_3634reader_3634about 8 years ago
Good for a short story

I am not, normally, a fan of short stories as there isn't enough time to develop the storyline. However, for a shortie, this is one of the better ones that I have come across.

McSmoothieMcSmoothieabout 8 years ago
too fast for me

but I like plot development

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
I thought .....

this was just enough plot - I truly enjoyed the women stripping willingly

permanaturalpermanaturalalmost 6 years ago

Well, the story kinda ended quickly, but interesting anyway.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

Solid Tribal Nudity story.

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Writer of mostly oddball comedy and ridiculous situations. I've also written other stuff that actually paid the bills.