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EmirusEmirusabout 6 years ago
Pretty good.

I like the way you split this instalment in half rather than pressing the sex button right away. Then again the dining room etc and building up to the bedroom rather than straight in. I got a little confused at times with the bedroom scene but there were some nice little throwaway lines. On the whole I didn’t think (personal opinion) that it was as good as the first chapter but it was still pretty good and I look forward to the next chapter.

As an aside, and nothing to do with this chapter, I understand the not using her panties but, in my practical experience, being gagged by a ladies panties whilst she is sodomising you is absolute bliss. But that’s a different category.

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