All Comments on 'Business Trip'

.... it's written in 'you' perspective. At that point the story became unreadable for me. If you want to ostracize more than half of your readers, keep it!

Anonymous says this story is written from the "you" perspective. It seems to me that it is written in first person (Anonymous is an idiot). Also, Anonymous says you will "ostracize" half of your readers. I didn't read anything the indicated you were ostracizing anyone.(Anonymous is a huge fucking idiot). He or she was just trying to use big words like the adults and failed miserably.

I think it was a great story. I had no problem with the perspective from which it was written, and I sure as fuck don't feel ostracized!!