All Comments on 'Business Trip Encounters Ch. 02'

...whether in Asia or North America. Well written.

I really liked the story over all - I think the concept was a good one. But I had a hard time with the continually changing tenses of the story and some obvious errors. Re-read the story and edit to correct errors and then you will have a great story!

What could have been a 100% rating for a really good story line has to be downgraded because of all the grammatical mistakes that kept distracting this reader. If the bad writing is set aside, the description of the sensuous massage was stimulating, reminding me of all the similar massages I've given in my professional career. "Accidentally" brushing against a client's sensitive areas with the backs of my hands during a standard massage stroke usually caused him or her to sigh or purr or moan, indicating that more intimate contact would be appreciated. I would then administer increasingly erotic strokes, almost always finishing the session with a happy ending. I've been retired for years, but still enjoy giving sensuous massages. I no longer charge for the service, because I want to keep practicing and perfecting my erotic strokes. If lmanok writes more sexual massage stories, I hope he'll read and carefully edit them before submitting them to Literotica, because I find them very stimulating.