All Comments on 'Busy Bridesmaids'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Beautifully written

Just a bit too short, though it would be very nice if you were to continue with further chapters, she has the key to the door, will she have the key to her heart ?

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Other Interests

Wondered why women often chose their best friend to be head bridesmaid,I found out[as did my son]that my new daughter in law was bi,much to the disgust of his mother[ we were divorced long before our sons wedding]I suggested that he make the most of the situation and regularly fuck the pair of them.That went down like a lead balloon,with a comment from my ex wife "that is typical of your father "

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Very Erotic

A very well written erotic story,I love this type of lesbian tale,hope for part two.Hetero Male.

AppolineAppolineover 14 years ago
You had me at hello

Beautifully written story!

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago

So hot! Please continue.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
More!

I want to hear more of this story god I’m dripping wet reading 🤤

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Come back ... please!

I hope you have not given up on Literotica. It needs more writers like you who can so effectively describe a sexual interlude from the perspective of a woman. This is a terrific little short story.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

I want more....please have more..........

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 month ago

Just about nearly extreme what you have done to me with your story. Please do me more !

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