by PurpleMonkeyDishwash
well kind of demeaning to me
we all know black cock is very habit forming but not like this story tells it
Too many characters....too crowded, why can't you focus on one single mom and her exploits in the hands of son's bully.
Like the story, but I agree with the idea of focusing on one of the moms. Her willingness to conduct herself like that in front of her son is very erotic
Loved the writing, the characters, the dialogue, and the sex. It was very arousing at times, yet also light hearted.
Great job on this.
5/5
You have it by introducing two Mums to this story. Great stuff. Looking forward to the next one.
The good: Very erotic situation. Great writing.
The bad: Lacking realism. I mean, the 2 moms fall prey to black cock the same day? Too much of a coincidence. And the one mom having sex in front of the son is something that I feel wouldn't happen in real life. Unless the mom had already built a "relationship" with the stud. Which doesn't happen in 30 mins or less.
I gave it a 5 anyways, because it was very good.
I'm so glad to see your hiatus is over. Fantastic story, please please please write more. Cheers.
You are either a self-promoting black nerd, or a self-loathing closet fag. Either way, it shows a lack of real-life sex experience. Two stars, only because the grammar standards are so low these days.
Please continue the great work. Can't wait for the followup chapter.
As a white fella, HATE THE IDEA, that you put the WHITE GUYS DOWN, & concentrate so much on race.
But, the action, of the guys fucking the (2) hoty Moms, while their pathetic little sons
watch, is just pure genius!-EATANDBEMERRY
This story is clearly one of your most popular, why is there no part 2 yet?
God, I love your stories! You are amazing. Keep up the great work and please continue with this story I can't wait for the next chapter. I love the moms in this story. They are gorgeous and total whores. I wish my mom was like that, fucking random black guys and swallowing their cum. I would it if you made the mothers get gangbanged in one chapter by a load a black guys while the sons watched pathetically.
This is one of my all time favorite stories. Can we please have a part 2?
Not to be rude, but man whoever wrote this was an idiot. A black man fucking a lady? Just because he's got a big penis?
I would loooooooooooooooove to see more of this story
Daphne Rosen and Jaylene Rio/Kiara Mia fit the mold of the mothers you wrote about well.
My friend's mom is super hot. She isn't busty like the mothers in the story, but she does have a hot body and I think about it a lot. My friend is a nice guy, but sometimes I wish his mom would let me and my other friends take turns banging her in front of him. He would be angry as fuck and the thought of it makes me want it to happen even more.
So sad that there's no new stuff. Possibly my favourite writer. Has he abandoned us all? All the negative commenters/anyone who gave this less than 5 can go suck a fart!
It all works as a story. The characters are somewhat too stereo typical and this underscores race relations in a way that some readers will give negative or low ratings to. I think Maddie is cool and Stone can be molded further while Reshawn comes across as a composite of the authors bad experiences.
Put a bush on a female. Not all babes think Madison Avenue bullshit is truth because they have lovers who request hair.
I've been coming back to this story for years, hoping for a part 2. It is the single most erection-inducing thing I have ever read. I've read all of your other stories to date trying to find that same feeling, but nothing compares. Please, please write a part 2.
I'm not joking people who write this literal unrealistic and utter trash deserve to be fucking genocided and beheaded. Like honestly I hope you get raped and burned alive.