by lakesailer_mi
I liked your characters and their interactions. It was a good start. I am ready now for something more to happen. Bring on chapter 2!
Its great to read more of your work! I always enjoy the vivid images and the dialobue---wonderful work as always
This one gets my fully erect penis award---and well you knwo that is a pretty special award :)
love it. they should have a jilling party togother for your next chapter