All Comments on 'Butterflies Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Good Start

I liked your characters and their interactions. It was a good start. I am ready now for something more to happen. Bring on chapter 2!

RyanBlackRyanBlackover 14 years ago
Well done friend!!

Its great to read more of your work! I always enjoy the vivid images and the dialobue---wonderful work as always

This one gets my fully erect penis award---and well you knwo that is a pretty special award :)

woody1230woody1230about 14 years ago
great story

love it. they should have a jilling party togother for your next chapter

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Male, 50's, married. I write because I enjoy it. I hope you enjoy reading it. If you do, let me know. Here to laugh, play, and fantasize.

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