by julietbravo
You are writing in a wonderful style. So romantic... hope we can read many more stories from you!
By all means, keep coming with the translations. Your translations are a lot better than many of the stories written by people that have English as their first language. The story is very interesting and I do hope you write more to it.
Sorry but the English grammar needs a lot of work. I could not get past the first paragraph in the story. Try again.
The translations were fine and even when it was a little off, I still got what you meant. I liked the story it was super sexy and can't wait to read more
Mein Deutsche ist nicht sehr gut. Dies war ein schones Buch. Ich mochte Sie ermutigen, Geschichten zu English Ihre zu ubersetzen. Ich wurde gerne mehr zu lesen. Danke
My German is not very good. This was a nice book (story). I would like you. I encourage you translate to English. I would like to read more. Thank you
Wonderful way of expressing feelings and your translations will continue to improve!