All Comments on 'Butterfly'

by ladyroxanne21

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chris73170chris73170almost 11 years ago
loved it

i loved that story. it brought tears to my eyes

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
beautifully awkward

caterpillars do know something of weaving a cocoon... and the brevity of a possible empathetical and artful life in its timeless wake... relativity

joelafayettejoelafayettealmost 11 years ago
weird.

Points for originality I suppose.

ladyroxanne21ladyroxanne21almost 11 years agoAuthor
From the Author

Thank you all for your comments. Being called weird is actually one of the highest compliments to me :-D

All of your comment have brightened my day. Thank you!

Have a happy day,

Roxanne

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
so good!

so good! I loved it

..x

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Tears

First I was appalled, then it nearly broke my heart and I cried when he died. I was sucked in. Never before have I read a story that's made me cry. Excellent story.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Just Wow!

I could not believe what I just read! At first glance it was sexy and a huge turn on, but by the end you are falling in love with the characters! I hope you plan on writing more, I absolutely LOVE LOVE LOVE this! Bravo to you! Best read on this site in a VERY long time.

ladyroxanne21ladyroxanne21over 10 years agoAuthor
Response from the Author

All these comments are making me blush. Thank you so much for liking what I wrote :-D

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Well done author.

Kudo's for your efforts and time - your fans appreciate it.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
Great story

True, it was a bit weird and perverted at first but made more an more believable as it went on. I ended up tearing up near the end. I would guess that the guy wasn't well off but that $5000 was the best purchase he had ever made. He didn't die alone although it's too bad they didn't have more time together. Life is so short and she may have been the best thing that ever happened to him.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Loved It.

Such a sad story, but wonderful at the same time.

goldie069goldie069almost 5 years ago
UGH!!

HOW DARE YOU!! I read this story, and Iwas captivated. I seldom if ever make comments but now I feel obliged!! You suck!! You made me care about these characters!! Now there are ninjas cutting onions around me, or my allergies are acting up or something!! I’m not crying you are!! Great work.

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