All Comments on 'Butterfly Ch. 06'

This was such a sexy story - am now off the read the others and cant wait for the next one!!

Thanks. Because of you I will now have to go back and read all 5 of the previous chapters. It will take a long time, so maybe I should feed the dog first.......Naw, fuck the dog. He can eat later.

All seriousness aside, you've written an extremely hot story with a lot of humor and and good developement. I hope #7 will be along shortly.

really hot and sexy. great

Wow, you are amazing. That story just kept getting better. I thought the scene was both erotic and very realistic. The fact that the guy felt jealous seemed very true to life. It seems like a great fantasy until you start thinking your girlfriend likes it more than she likes you. I wish she had offered Crystal to him to fuck, it only seemed fair, but life isn't always fair.

This is a wonderful piece of erotic writing, with just a hint of sadness (I see bad things for the boyfriend). Oh well, you play with fire...

Keep up the excellent work,

....S-Des