by silverangel621
I like the tempo, the slow build. I’m incredibly curious to find out what they’re each running from and I definitely already love that they’ve found each other. Both so desperate. Hoping they’ll be able to help each other find safety.
Arggggggggggggg! Why? Why would you leave such a cliff hanger. Please, please, pleeeeeasseeeee! Finish it.
It is too good to be left hanging. Please find the time to continue it - I will be checking back for updates and continue to hope!
Can I echo what has already been said, please reconsider completing this story. It's such a great beginning and I'd like to see where these two characters will go.
...and this is not one of them! Please reconsider - the energy between the characters is great and the story line is intriguing!!!
Let me just say. I love the Gone with the Wind reference. O'Hara and Butler. Fantastic!
Though, just a word to the wise, you might want to at least spell check before you submit. Lots of easily rectified spelling errors going on here! It didn't spoil my enjoyment, but if this takes off like I hope it will, then you'll have countless comments about it...
Hoping the next chapters are just as great, Thanks for sharing.
Please post more ASAP!
Are you going to continue Gilded in Gold too?
Love your writing style.
I'm thoroughly enjoying you story so far. It's a shame that the chapters aren't longer but then it's good reading so I'm happy to get what I can. :) Thank you for sharing.