by silverangel621
I'm enjoying your story and looking forward to reading what follows. Easily worth 5 stars.
from Sweet Submissive and while I kind of enjoyed that, I'm enjoying this much more!!! The writing is much more to my taste and so intriguing.
Just one chapter and I'm totally hooked! You're going on my favourites list as of now. Off to the next chapter and then much more I hope!!!
Stopped reading after a few paragraphs. Get an editor, if you know what I mean.