All Comments on 'By the Bay Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
me like

hmm did someone take her sister or did she leave on her own? And where did Madame Ruth go?

cantfightfatecantfightfateover 14 years ago
Good chapter.

Looking forward to more!

lancewmlancewmover 14 years ago
Great story so far

Excellent writing!!

hotcocoa6904hotcocoa6904over 14 years ago
Excellent!!

Don't be too long before you write the next chapter. I am loving it so far.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
LOVELY!

absolutely lovely! I'm glad ur taking ur time developing the romance. Its perfect. L.

C_frommnC_frommnover 14 years ago
So Far So Good

Like the Pace not Hurried and leaving You to wonder how You meet and Screw in Twenty words or less. But its Crucial to see how things work out when he Meets Meera. since by all descriptions she is Beautiful compared to sister. and more headstrong. Will be interesting to see how it all works Out.

Will Anita be Broken Hearted again or will she find Love?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
AWESOME

Gosh its not common to come across stories like this ....and i find myself very very interested to know more of this story :)

THELOVELY1GLOTHELOVELY1GLOover 12 years ago
Flowing

freely, keep it up.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
really good

cannot wait to read more

rightbankrightbankabout 6 years ago
Glad to have found this series

The contrasting of the cultures is woven well.

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