All Comments on 'By the Horns Ch. 01'

Hello, faithful readers! I’m gonna keep this bit short and sweet. This story is one of three possible big, multi-chapter stories that are in the running to become my next main project (By the Horns, The Titles of Angra Ba'ahram, and The Irresistible Goldenboy), and in gratitude to my supporters, I’m giving my fans control over which one comes first! I’m letting my patreon patrons not only decide which one of the three goes first, but if it wins, I’ll also let people vote on the chapters they want to see first! So, if you like what you see here and want to see more soon, check out my patreon page!

http://www.patreon.com/AdmiralSquish

With the upcoming release of Arkham Knight it makes the most sense :)

A fun read

A little bit too Florey/verbose in style in some places

I look forward to a plot as complex as the sex

djb

The way you describe sexual organs is really funny. "Two foot sausage" "beefy rod" "Monsterous shaft" "fearsom weapon"

It's like you are allergic to the word 'penis'. It was a very entertaining read for sure.

You seem to have the habit of overembellishing. Sometimes simple is better. This ia a general rule of style that you want o keep in mind with any type of literary work