All Comments on 'By the Pale Moonlight Ch. 02'

Can I just say it is refreshing to see something original in Non human than all the repetitive, found my mate so I must take her, against her will more often than not, stories.

how can she be related to the most powerful alpha and not know it? how does no one in the pack know she exists?

All the signs have been there blaring at Tara but she is so deep in denial. I guess she is one of those that is fine with reading it but when reality hits she is terrified and don't want to believe its true. If she stop and evaluate what has been going on her whole life she will realize there maybe some truth to Dr. Miller's teachings.

I am really enjoying this tale and look forward to reading all the following installments be they short or long you have me hooked!

I love this story, can't wait to see more.

Masterskitten26

The only ting that stuck out is the lack of knowledge on hip hop, which is not all woman hating bigotry and her stupid choice to go to a college because of a professor who probably teaches a max of 6 classes there. But its still a good story

Nice read keep it up