All Comments on 'By the Pale Moonlight Ch. 01'

5 years or not well done for getting back out there and irrespective of negative comments that some will make I liked it and look forward to reading more.

You are anything but rusty. Can see this as a future favourite already.

Wow! I was disappointed that it wasn't longer, I was really getting into it! I look forward to the next part :)

lupus lupo wolf easy to see WERE this is going.just wondering if dr miller is trying to bring the were world out to the public.

Welcome back...good start for your come-back.

Look forward to reading more of this story.

Some spelling mistakes, for example stare well for stairwell and cluts for klutz. Proofread to catch easy errors like this.

You've definitely got me interested. Hmm, what could she be, with her "sperm donor" daddy sporting a wolf tattoo? :-)

Please continue with this story, I for one want to see where this goes next. You've set up a lot of possibilities here with the theory that the supernaturals secretly rule the world. Excellent beginning. 5 stars. ~K.

Still, I couldn't help thinking of the Joker's question to young Bruce Wayne, "Hey, kid, did you ever dance with the Devil by the pale moonlight?"

Good beginning although a bit short. Please make it l9nger. Can't wait to read more

I don't think she necessarily HAS to be were. "Mr. Lupus" asked what she was. Seems to me that he would recognized the scent even if she was of mixed blood.

I don't know; it's only one of the reasons that I am desperate to read more!

I really like this a good start a bit short . Do me and everyone a favour please make sure you carry on writing ! And carry through the story to the end, not like a lot of stories on here that never get finished.

I just started getting into this and you stop >_<

Please please please keep on writing!

U got me... now im sitting waiting 4 ur next chapter.

You got me hooked!!! XD

And want to read more. Great 1st chapter, keep writing.

It's a good story line, and I am looking forward to reading more. Thank you, and welcome back to entertaining the masses.

Keep going I can't wait to read more.

Great beginning, I'm excited about the rest. I have absolutely nothing negative to say other than TOO SHORT!!!! :) LOL

Great beginning, looking forward to more.

I really liked the start of your story.

I love it so far...please keep posting!!!!

Please continue, I like where this is going!

For such a long time not writing, I think it was great. Please keep writing.

Nice start grammar not that bad , keep going. thanks for posting

What I read in your opening storyline, I enjoyed. And your grammar is fine.