All Comments on 'By Your Side Ch. 04'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Omg

Omg great story so far, one of the best, can't wait to read the next chapters! U're so talented!

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
ok... you got to slow it down.

you are thinking faster than your fingers can type. case in point:

He looked at me and smiled. "Hey." jakes sweet voice replied.

My heart fluttered and if he said anymore my heat would explode. "Not much." I smiled. "How've you been?"

WHaT diD i MisS? I love this story but you're killing me with the spelling errors and massive holes in the plot.

avidreader_01avidreader_01over 13 years ago
the future

cant wait to see what happens next...

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