by CudgelFace
ok i still love this story but don't you think it is time to move the story forward . yes we get the point she is in heat. now give us some action.
If it ain't to your liking, then come back later.
Let the authors do their own thing, and don't try to force them to change their pace.
There's usually a reason for pacing. It's called plot.
Would be more fun to read if you made longer chapters. Not enough to keep me interested.
I am a BIG cat lover and I adore this story! You have me on the edge of my seat! Please write faster . . . please?😽😺
Fantastically written, would just like to see more development with the plot, you know when does he meet the othwr cat recruits and so on ,but keep it up fantastic job on the story so far.
the authors are constantly asking us about what we think. i answered...trs
Ill check back in to see when there is more, i liked it enough to want to read more so good job!
Putting a Bat-Shit-Crazy Slut in charge of anything other than sucking the buisness end of a loaded shotgun while she pulls the trigger is as stupid as the so-called protagonist not IMMEDIATELY reporting her to her superiors. It is also as stupid as continuing to read any more of this waste of server space. The first chapter was promising, then you decided to follow this fem-dom nonsense. 1-Star for DAYS