by mutterguffin2
that he didn't like it when one of them tongued his ass.
WTF is wrong with that?
I like it when a girl does that to me :)
This submission should not have been approved. There are several spelling errors. I ask your forgiveness and please try to look past the spelling and enjoy the story. I hope you like my pencil drawings as well. My father was a college trained artist and taught me every thing I know.
good drawings, but the part where you get all weird about the girl sticking her tongue in the guys ass makes you sound like you're in denial or something. Having a girl tongue your ass doesn't make you gay, fucking a guy would make you gay. A girl rimming my ass feels awesome!
all except for the first time with the sisters...
very good drawings....
am working on numerous stories and full length erotic novels
some with incest ...
I agree with the other comment. Thr story was ok, but the "illustrations" were lacking. I would have rather read it without the drawiings.
Some of the comments surprised me. I thought the drawings were excellent. If I had to choose between story or pics, I would take story easily, but the quality of the pictures was much much better than I have ever seen in here, and their presence was a net plus to the story.
As good as that sounds the actual content of the story not the writing but the actions did not resonate with me.
I felt I should save that till last in order to get out my admiration for the writer and writing.
Thank you mutterguffin.
gf gave me blowjob while reading and came 4 times . . . wish I could fuck the girls so bad!
Read this to my wife! She called her cousin and I started over. We 3 way skyped and masturbated. I'd never seen Adrianna naked before. A month later we met at a national park cabin for our own fuck fest. But we did cows 'n' bull. I was the dairy farmer who took care of and milked and bred the cattle. This is insane!
The illustrations are well above average for Literotica. Glad to see you're back to writing here. I would welcome another illustrated tale.