All Comments on 'Cabin Fever Pt. 01'

by kellyjojo

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jenorma2012jenorma2012over 7 years ago
pretty good start

I hope we do not have to wait too long for the next part, and as your reading this story you could tell she was being set up for this to happen

kellyjojokellyjojoover 7 years agoAuthor
working on it now..

how would you like part 2 to go? ideas and feed back appreciated ;)

jenorma2012jenorma2012over 7 years ago
ok

this may sound old and it might be done to death but how about since they are in the woods the girls go for a nature walk or a picnic just the two of them and have things heat up there

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Yum.

That was hot.

lesbearlesbearover 7 years ago
hmm.

The sex was hot and all but I wish there was a different category for this type of story. I actually like lesbian erotic, not so much "every guys fantasy" erotica.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
very interesting awesome author

Awesome story I could feel myself there watching amazing and sectaular writting... if it wasn't that I am committed to my own babygirl I would love to have jumped in the middle of both of them

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Part 2 idea (s)

Kellyjojo...very sensual story, had me wet and touching myself. I, personally, would like to see Julie's sexy, red panties play into it. Nothing hotter than sexy, wet panties (being slightly pushed into her while being licked, etc.). Leave the guys on the sidelines...perhaps just quietly syroking themselves or sending them back to bed while Julie & Kara finish making love. One more thought, having them rub pussies (tribbing?). Great story...hurry with part 2.

kellyjojokellyjojoover 7 years agoAuthor
anonymous...part 2 is already out...

but dont get discouraged ...Kara and Julie will be alone again for HOT one on one in part 3 ;)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Great plot 👍 but I'm waiting desperately for the conclusion

Nice plot can't wait for the next one or the conclusion

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