All Comments on 'Cabin in Montana Ch. 02'

Why didn't George have his car parked in the garage? "I'm getting cold, and the dirt road to get here is not safe..." So George and Terry shovel out their cars and driveway to nowhere. George is cold and instigates sex in a cold garage when there's a warm cabin just inside the door. None of this makes ANY sense!

I like it but it is too short. Maybe it would be better to finish one story before starting several more. I don't like waiting forever to read another chapter, by then I've forgotten what the story was about.

My first impression said, "Too fast re action, not enough detail but just enough to get the picture!" Then I realized it was two young and active bucks - at their age and energy level life would move faster. For this old fart, maybe offer the next posting (certainly will be more?) take it slower, smell the roses (the snows gone away) and let's us enjoy more emotion and action.

I fully enjoyed the read. Oops, the weather today is proving winter isn't over.