All Comments on 'Caged Control Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago

Good start to your story and I enjoyed reading it, although I do think it is quite sad that a 23 year old is in a rut about sex. On the grammar, you might want to check your use of "whole" versus "hole," "there" versus "their," and "laid" versus "lay."

Thanks for a nice story.

HarryHaversackersHarryHaversackersalmost 11 years ago
Realism is lacking

I don't know it you've had any practical experience with chastity and denial, however I have. I've been locked up 90% of the time for the past two years, and subjected to extended periods of orgasm denial.

Your story is based on the fantasy version of male chastity. In reality, it takes much longer for a wife to accept trying chastity, much longer to correctly fit and become accustomed to the device, and the dialogue between the two of them is laughable.

A rewrite is in order, after you've had some experience.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
cock cage

Looking to get a cock cage for Mike my hubby he has a small cock 1.5in S and 3.5in H do thay make one to fit him Rebecca

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