by MinnesotaMindStorm
I wish there was some way of getting authors to classify their 'works' more accurately. This is obviously more 'loving (cheating) wives', a category I don't normally read. The writing is good as far as it goes but it's not what it claims to be. I did rate it a '3' which isn't bad but...
Most stories cross multiple categories and I think this story is listed accurately. It's disappointing to hear that a reviewer has downgraded this story based on its category listing. Does being listed in a different category somehow change the story?
I enjoyed the story and hope the author continues writing.
The MC introduces herself by telling us she's had two lovers, then launches the story by telling us how she took on her fourth. That kind of inconsistency is distracting. I didn't care for the I'm-not-the-like-most-girls conversational tone or style. Tell us a story instead of running down a list of character attributes.