All Comments on 'Caleb 01 - Awakening'

Good re-write!

I have been reading and following the series, I cannot lie, I would of rather your continued the story where it was.

I don't see why you needed the rewrite, I was enjoying it already. Rereading this story from the beginning again is one big deja vu.

The rewrite was necessary because there was a large plot hole. Caleb and the others were simply too young to be where they were in their education. They needed to be older. Most of the rewrite is about correcting that, so as you say one big deja vu. I did take the opportunity to run a second editorial pass, and make some little changes too, but those are insignificant. I had hoped that Lit would post them all at the same time. Indeed it took me ages to get them to take the old versions down. It is their choice to post a chapter a day and not mine. You could quite happily wait until you get to a chapter you have not read, and with the knowledge that Caleb and the girls are two years older, and Ness is a year older, carry on - there is no real need to re-read them unless you want to. All the chapters will be back up by somewhere around the middle of January, along, I hope with a couple of new chapters that I will be posting. Just remember that because chapter 1 and 2 were merged, all subsequent chapters are numbered one less so the old chapter 3 used to be chapter 4 and so on. I hope this clears things up, and always remember the story is available elsewhere if you can't wait.

It is your right to want to change things that have been bothering you.

I’m just glad the story didn’t get erased and left us hanging.

I’ll enjoy the re-reading and wait for the new parts.

I am thrilled to have another reason to reread this because it is such a fun read that manages to cover every emotion at some point and a couple of those emotions hit pretty hard. I want to thank you for clearing up why you did the rewrites since I was starting to wonder if maybe you decided you were done which would have been a serious pity. Either way I am glad you are still writing and posting. Thanks for taking the time to re-edit, rewrite and re-post while still making new content. That is loads of work and I appreciate you wanting to make sure that you put out the best story possible.

J.D.

God damn! Who knew pansexual mind control was exactly what I needed in my life!

I don't comment, but this was so well written and high level with a good build up. Thanks!

Please consider adding more story tags

It would probably help if you added more tags to let people know about the range of content. That way people can decide if MM is not their thing

I am reading all your stories again. After reading this, I am surprised I continued but it was so well written like your others I knew there was much more to this story. M/M is not for me.

The gay stuff is not for me, but he story is well written and 5he characters are good. My x has a fantasy that we could have a m/m/f, and that I would do stuff with the guy, one of the many reasons she is an x. I will read the rest of the story, pretty good aside from my hang ups.

I started to read this story once before and backed out at the wet dream, thinking it was a gay story.. something made me read further this time and I'm glad I did. This is my first time reading from the perspective of a (supposedly) pansexual guy. I didn't find it uncomfortable at all, quite enjoyable in fact. Thank you for teaching this old dog something new.