All Comments on 'Caleb 16 - Coming Home'

I've enjoyed the rewrites and the new content. I'm glad you turned his anger down a smidge. First time I read the story Caleb was a spoilt child who deserved everything dianna did to him. Can't wait for more.

Not sure why Caleb doesn’t require Dianna and Maggie to take on a competition to not use their power on Caleb or the girls as part of his employment

Better and better!

Great story... I've had a continuing thought throughout this tale, imagine a graduate ethics class reading this for a roundtable discussion... because Caleb, despite his faults, is trying to think ethically.

What if you were in his place, with his power, what would you do???

Thank you for the chapter! I really appreciate the story and the work you put behind it! (coming from storiesonline where we cannot write a comment per chapter but only at the end...)