All Comments on 'Caleb Woke Up Ch. 07'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
ALMOST...

...MISSED this story --

I've been following the series in the 'Mind Control Hub'; just happened to check the 'New Stories' page(s). I guess 'Incest/Taboo' trumps 'Mind Control' for hub placement.

As usual (by me), 5 stars

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
thank you

i totally thought that this stotry might be dead im so glad its not

5.stars

Eric_ShiftEric_Shiftalmost 12 years ago
Now this is what I like.

Inventive places to have sex, and lots of foreplay.

Thank you.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago

amazing!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Thank you

I love this series so far, thank you for continuing the series.

Keep it up with mom and sis. as much as i love the other girls, calebs mother and sister are what keep me coming back.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Awesome

Both sexy and funny, and for that your stories get 5's

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
BACON!!!

Glad you finally got bacon in there. keep the stories cumming.

McBaconMcBaconover 11 years agoAuthor
chapter 8 in progress

Working on next chapter.

Outline

- take shower with anna

- pick up gretchen

- go to church

- touch base with mel

- visit ming

I think that takes through lunch. Sorry for the spoilers. Subject to change.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Simply Amazing

Loving this series so far, it has all my favorite elements (mind control, harem, incest ect.). Keep up the great work.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
yes another please

soon

McBaconMcBaconover 11 years agoAuthor
From the outline below, only made it to church

Chapter 8 has been submitted to Incest/Taboo for a few days, was sitting in MC prior to that.

Not sure how long it takes to post, but I keep tweaking the story, and each time I resubmit, it goes to the end of the queue. So the delays there are mostly my fault, but I think the story is a little tighter because of it.

zena99zena99about 11 years ago
Fantastic!

I loved Anna's comments regarding whoring herself out for Caleb and bringing home sluts for him to fuck. I would enjoy seeing that theme pursued.

MishaPearl2MishaPearl2about 7 years ago
Uff Da, Indeed!

Nice cliff-hanger... :-) MP2

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Getting boring

Great potential story line but got dull as ditch water

TSreaderTSreaderover 3 years ago
Lots of fun!

And lots of yummy play! Thank you!

tnburn72tnburn72over 3 years ago
Go Caleb Go

AND I like the Uff Da (PS I'm part Norwegian, I know)

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