by bulld
I wish that you would continue with this story. I love the way that you started it off and although it is a great story, its got so much more potential if you keep going. I look forward to reading more by you!
this is by far the best storie I have ever read concerning submission. I would love you to finish writing this, to make it a complete novel.
These two get kudos for erotica. it is more than just erotic literature it is also a good guide of how D/s should be
I simply love this story. It is possibly the best I have ever read in this catagory. Master is the Master we are all looking for.