All Comments on '"Call me Mr Daniels" Ch. 01-02'

You’ve definitely got talent(s). Continue......

I need more!!!!!

looking for chapter 3 and more.

I came so hard before I even got to page 3. Please continue..

I am looking forward to more..please write more to this hot story..

Brilliant non-consent story. Only thing is saying ‘cummed’ it doesn’t sound right. Thank you for writing a hot piece of literature - very sexy

Replace cummed with came

No offense, just an observation. So, in my opinion, you need to expand the word choice for her breasts- "Pert" was used three times, I think? It was enough to notice, at the very least.. If the two chapters weren't concurrent, it wouldn't have happened, but they were, so it did. That's not to say the rest was perfect, but hell, I'm not gonna lie, it gave me a big O twice, on the first page and the third, so yeah, keep up the great work!

Oh how I wish I could be Ella. This played into my fantasy so well. Very hot.

Great, a really hot story. The courtroom scene is a nice idea. More please!

Extremely hot , enjoyed that so much. The buildup from resistance to disbelief and surrender to lust. Nice dirty lil fantacy. Hoping to stroke to more from you

The playful beginning was fun, but once the guy turned rough and insulting, I lost interest. A reluctant woman being exposed, groped, fondled, fingered, and finally fucked is all very erotic in my opinion. But slapping, pinching, punching, biting, and vulgar name calling kill the mood. Pain and filthy language aren't sexy in my opinion. Just one guy's opinion.

I have to echo the previous criticism - face fucking (and the worse because she was unwilling), and slapping her about, should have no place in our lives, but the 'net became full of anal and face fucking in the late 90s or early 2000s and have been thought of as "the norm" ever since, probably affecting young men more than youmg women, so they now consider such things as normal !

There is no place for meanness. Hurting a girl and not untying her is beyond the pale.