All Comments on 'Callie's Island'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Keep going!

A great read, one of the better stories on here, which is saying something!

Just a few grammatical {and anatomical, cervix is NOT bottom of vagina) errors to iron out in the future, but thats really the only criticism.

EverLuxEverLuxalmost 8 years ago
Loved it!

I absolutely loved this. It includes all of my favorite things in nonhuman stories: multiple beasts, unwilling human girl, breeding, and lots of cum!

I know how some people feel about anatomical correctness, and I think that in more realistic stories, it's incredibly important, but there are just certain ideas that get us off more than the reality.

I just started posting stories less than a month ago, and I know how great it is to get comments and feedback, so I wanted to give you a big thumbs up :)

Keep on writing about what turns you on. That's the most important advice I can give.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Oh, a story where

the heroine is raped by animals.

Benzguy280Benzguy280almost 8 years ago
Erotic

Outstanding story love the beauty being held by the three Beast! Love it, want more ready for the next chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago

This is amazing please make a Callie's island 2.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago

The description LITERALLY said this story was about a girl on an island of mythical beasts... so if that's not your thing, you're either insipid or have some Freudian issues going on there, either way it's not the author's fault. (You should probably stop reading the nonhuman stories too, which again should have been obvious!)

"Bottoming out" is common slang (in the US anyhow) for hitting the cervix... because no penis is going past it, no matter how tiny.

I loved this story & am frustrated to find that once AGAIN a promising new writer has submitted only one story, received little encouragement, some really stupid comments, and never returned with another.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Keep writing

You should definitely submit more stories!

skippersdadskippersdadover 3 years ago

nice keep them coming

Familyluv2114uFamilyluv2114uover 1 year ago

Very hot story.

I can’t believe it’s your first ever......You have a talent.Please continue with more if possible.

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