All Comments on 'Calling It In'

Yeah, I thought that was what they were doing! But I always thought the "girls" were fifty-something trailer park trash with their hair in curlers worried about how they were gonna get their teeth fixed, not some redheaded babe in Winnie-The-Pooh pajamas. Ever thought of turning this into a video??? Some guys get turned on by redheads in Winnie-The-Pooh pajamas and would max out their credit cards to see it! (Ha Ha Ha!)

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Moondancer, you really got the scene painted well. Give Shawna a pint of Ben & Jerry's Cherry Garcia--she did a great job.

Moondancer, Give ol' Shawna a pint of Ben & Jerry's Cherry Garcia. She deserves the good stuff. Great writing! Since you're the rare person who can write this, and then write a heartbreaking tearjerker like "Forever", you deserve their whole damn factory! You go, girl!!

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