by xelliebabex
I like the way you have set it up. This story could go on to explore several avenues of BDSM. I am eagerly looking forward to the further adventures of Paddy/Daddy and Callie.
Keep up the good work.
Thank you Larascasse, I appreciate the support you give me ^_^
it's a good story. i'd love to read next chapters soon. thanks for sharing
I will try to get the next chapter out soon but it is a busy time of the year for me, rl has a way of cramping my writing time. Thanks for the nice comments ^_^
I usually don't enjoy reading Daddy Dom stories, but I gave this one a try and I really like it. The plot and the relationship between Paddy and Callie is deep and real. You're an awesome writer. Keep it up!F
Thank you so much I am glad you tried reading my story, your comment like those of everyone else mean the world to me.
This story was incredible : ) I could not sleep all night for thinking of it.
Such a beautifully told story. I can already see the love developing. Please write the next chapter quickly!
Comments like both of yours make me wish i was a much faster writer, I will endeavour to produce a new chapter soon. Thank you so much you motivate me.
All the 'anons' some it up..cannot add a thing..thank you!
Its so nice to still receive such nice comments after the story has disappeared form the new story boards. thank you so much ^_^
Please please continue this story! I think about what will happen next between Calliope and her Daddy and I just can't wait to read more.
I do plan for more chapters unfortunately it is a busy time of year and i am not the fastest writer but all you comments motivate me to write more. I will have another chapter before the holidays :)
~ellie
Why is there always cock sucking???? What a selfish prick..cant he ever return the favor???Why don't you write about eating pussy????? Are you against it??? This story sucks!!!!!
which makes for a very diverting read.
Solid 3 out of 5. Thanks for the effort. The first two chapters are gonna be enough for me, though. The dom/sub theme of the story was established early in the first chapter, and the running theme has offered too little variety to keep me interested. Well done on your detailed scenic descriptions, though. Just a total lack of humor, wit, or even likeability of any character has me pretty much bored with this stretch. Not a bad story, at all. - By the way, I hate being that asshole, but every time I see a writer use "myriad" incorrectly, I get this compulsive twitch lol. Myriad is the exact same as saying "many", only it lets you sound more obnoxious. So its just "they bought myriad items" not "a myriad of items". Again- not trying to be a prick, just trying to spread myriad awareness lol
I just don't like when mean Dom bitches get involved. I understand Callie is being taught, but I had to skim through the part with the nasty store whore. Here's to hoping there's not much more of that.
Is a DaddyDom! And a Sunday School teacher? Will Daddy share tomorrow?
These are my favorite kind of stories. So many with Doms portray them as cruel monsters. I have to laugh at the reference to "Big Bertha". My grandma's name was Bertha but she was about 90 lbs. soaking wet and very timid. My husband's grandma was over 6' tall, built like a line backer and mean as a snake. So when you mention "Big Bertha", I picture his grandma. Her favorite phrase to him was always the same, even after not seeing her for months or years. "You look like hell...get a hair cut!!" It just made him all the more determined to keep it long. Anyway, you've now joined the ranks of my favorite authors and this as one of my favorite stories. Thanks for a wonderful story. Looking forward to the next chapters.
M
I like it, particularly now that Padraig is showing a bit more of a caring side I am hoping that there is more dialogue between them and less lecturing. I know this is an old story of yours but I am taking it chapter by chapter so my comments may be a bit academic now as the ink is now dry on the page so to speak . On to chapter 3.
Hi Ellie,
Just discovered your writing last night, and felt compelled to sign up to the site so I could thank you! Great stories, very well written and beautifully balanced. I'm horrified that someone is passing off your work as their own, it's blatant theft. I hope you and your loved ones are keeping safe and well during these strange times, and I look forward to reading more of your work. X
Getting better did not like the begiing but i am now curieus to read the rest