All Comments on 'Camera Buff'

Wonderful story. Simple and sweet.

Well thought out plot and telling of the story. The only criticism I would have is you need to check your editing a little more closely. Watch the use of homonyms. I find that off-putting when I find it in a story. Keep up the writing!

Well done. Well written characters and a good, simple tale.

good story well written and very enjoyable. I did photography at school so enjoyed it even more.

There is some very good writing here. While it isn't exactly character development, seeing Rona with Louis that way was a good insight into her personality. I liked that they were both cool about their secret; no sneaky gossip.

RESPONSIBLE YOUTH ENJOYING THE EXPLORATION AND HANDLED WELL BY CBSUMMERS = THANKS FOR A MORE CONSISTENT THAN USUAL SHORT STORY ABOUT NON-PLUNDERING POWER, WHICH YIELDS A TRUSTING FUTURE FOR OUR YOUTH.

Great first story, looking forward to more

,fucking perfect nerd-scores-hot-bitch story. All us nerds out here are reliving our own minor triumphs, and wanking along with Louis! Great job, thanks!

those of you who haven't tried it yet are missing out on a real good time :)

Love the premise of this story! Nerds rock!

...with nice likeable characters who manage to nasty up their sex and fulfil fucking-the-cheerleader fantasies without falling into the trap of making the female character a brainless bimbo. Good work. Your photography on your website is great too.

Look forward to a sequel. Maybe he can take her anal cherry.

PLEASE, I MEAN PRETTY PLEASE

More please!! It was superb!

loved it....mmmm....could have been a bit dirtier though....next time?

Reminded me of my first time. Very classy writing. Please post more.

One of the best I have read lately.

Thanks!

MGM

we need more from these characters! please make this a series

Excellent story, flows well, reads well and does a nice job of giving the characters a bit of depth to make the whole thing that much better.

I look forward to any future stories you write.

I loved this story! It was one of those that truly drew me in and had me remembering "the good old days"!!

MORE! MORE! MORE!

truly well written and awesome. more, lots more pls.

I absolutely love it please make a series :D

Simultaneously hot &I'll sweet. I've found a favorite author!

Well written!! I loved this from start to finish. Please keep this story going.

Until not, I was sure every story had a weakness. Your attention to detail is/was so superb that it was an unnoticeable aspect of your writing!

This was my first, but, I will continue reading your stories until my fingers grow tired from selecting the number 5. I suspect many others will be forming the same habit.

THANKS!

I read the story with interest and a focus on details. Seven easy corrections and your story will be complete. These are in order of appearance in the story:

1. The cornea is clear. If there are flecks, she has a problem. Replace cornea with iris.

2. The slit is not of her vagina; it should be labia, pudenda, or pussy.

3. he camera should be the camera (or her camera).

4. you're penis should be your penis.

5. lets do this should be let's do this.

6. laid on my back should be lay on my back.

7. "What was that?" Asked Jason. Lowercase a on asked Jason.

Looking forward to Ch. 02.

this was hot... so very great, well developed, Hope you will continue to develop the story!

Hi, thanks for all the support. As a result of popular demand, I have written a sequel.

Last week I loaded the wrong file under the name Camera Buff ch 02. It took a whole week for it to be deleted. Sorry for the mistake.

To avoid confusion, I have reposted it under the title CAMERA BUFF-EXPOSED CH 01. It may take a week for it to be approved. Please check back. You'll be glad you did!

Also, thanks for pointing out errors in my story. I intend to fix those errors and repost them eventually. I am so happy for your interest and help!

Cb

Loved your other stories! Something about a guy finally getting the big boobed hottie in high school that I can relate to!

I loved everything about your story, it was one of the hottest stories I've read in a long time.

I don't go lookng for mistakes in anyone's stories, I have found that the brain will read it as the writer had intended.

I am glad however you didn't go into detail about the size of his cock, I get so tired of the stories with 9"-10" cocks and your cock sucking was done with a lttle more taste than a lot of the other stories.

I've read both installments and can't wait to find out what the continuing story will hold!

I've read the two that are currently available and loved them. Now I'm interested and am going to read through all your others. Thank you!!

I loved the story. Couldn't stop reading! I read both chapters you've written and posted. I hope they won't be the last in the story of Rona and Louis! You just have to continue. How they go forward. Keep them together. Keep them happy and in love. Give them the "happily ever after" we all hope for but seldom ever get.

That was fantastic, love the details, could almost see her breast jiggle!

Bookertl

Thank you for a wonderful story. Story was hot and well-developed. I look forward to reading more of your stuff.

Boy did you get my attention. Bring it on.

I've read several stories here and never once made a comment.

Great story, very well written.

You have a good grasp of teenage angst........nicely written.

believable (very nearly!), sensitive, fun. Great stuff.

Your Rona Barrett is fantastic with an attitude. Fucking great gal, no kidding. Love your stories and the genuine warm feelings you have for your characters. It reflects your personality. Unlike some authors here, you really love women. Really cherish them.

What a great attitude!

Thanks !

when I was in school? I always dreamed of meeting a girl like Rona and having an sexual experience like theirs--but it never happened.

Great story. Now I want to read Chapter 2.

Mesmerizing portrayal; I'm so looking forward to your other stories ... DKP

yes, i remember high-school, and all the clicks and gossip. The story was very believable, and I'm sure our hero, Louis was grateful that his mother taught him to keep his room clean. I liked that they did not get caught, that would have ruined the moment and the story. Great work.

Good Story!

Job well done

Now for part 2.

I thoroughly enjoyed this!

You'll have to keep writing, even so you have written a loving tale of the wonder years. I am delighted to rediscover this story of a nerd gone stud. And staying true to his word, then being rewarded, and rewarding Rona with much more than she expected!

AWESOME, a fiver if there ever was one.

That was HOT! Writing was pretty good too. Fatabulous fantasy. Cheers!

That was so hot!

I love photography, particularly erotic photography, so this story had special meaning to me! Thanks!

Excellent work. This is the kind of story I spend my time in Literotica looking for! It's a major fantasy and the type of story I try to write myself. Thanks for your great writing.

So good!!

Wow! You nailed it! Very well written AND incredibly erotic! Hot stuff!

Verry. Good. Peter.lowe. 561. Skype. /surrey /england. /. Age. 65

Every nerd or shy high school boys fantasy! A well thought out and written story. I look forward to reading the next chapter. I appreciate your and your Muse's imagination (memory?) and abilities to bring it to your story. Thank you for sharing your vision and talents.

Ever so much better, but there remain three problems on the first page: Two involve missing words and one is a misplaced apostrophe. The missing words are shown in UPPER CASE:

Normally, Rona Barrett wouldn't have talked to A nerd like me. She hadn't made eye contact with me for as long as I could remember. Although we were both eighteen, she just seemed older than me somehow. But I guess that was because she was Rona Barrett, the most popular girl IN the senior class, Student

assuming she lives with both parents, there is a misplaced apostrophe: parent's lake house SHOULD BE parents' lake house